Posted by Romeo Nice story, just need some conversation and longer chapters.
Will we find out yours and the kid name in the next chapter? Will this be the beginning of any type of relationship or a 3 or 1 day fling? What type of business trip are you on? What does the kid do, work or go to school?
These are some of the things we need to know. Try to include a story even though the sexual story is good.
Be different from the other writers and finish the story. It sounds like the beginning of a good story.
Posted by Mike thanks for the review - just posted part 2
this was just a 3 day fling = i never had so much sex as those 3 days and nights =
I will try to remember more of the conversations but mostly i remember the sex
The boys and I did email each other for awhile but never did get together again i fill in some of your questions in the next part