Posted by Alejandro This story is amazing 3 you have an awesome gift for writing. I hope u keep doing it. Better than twilight lol
Posted by Israel This is the best story i ever read...it was sad, and happy. I couldnt stop reading it...i cant wait til part 2 of this story...
Posted by Jay I LOVED IT AMAZING 5 STARS NO DOUBT
Posted by Eric Just keep it coming, please
Posted by Brandon When is the part 2 coming? i loved this story.
Posted by Carlos Ammaziing!!!!!!! Loved it! OMG!(:
Posted by #1fan! Biichess Fuck!!! Ur amazinng!!!!! Just re-read like 3 times.!! Wow blew my miind! I want him to come back though! But thEn again the fireman sounds HOT! Omg i cant decide which one i like better now.!!!!! Ummm he and the fireman should just date while the other one is in the army! Oops never mind it sounds kinda *rude* and he doesnt sound likE a whore.. Anyways my point keep the story goiin!!!!:)))))))))))
Posted by rhaf can't wait for the next part. Oh my, what a nice story, i love it. I like its love story. . . Please continue it.
Posted by Dani Love it!!!
Posted by agr the best story i have ever read. Please make a part 2 soon. Love uou so much.
Posted by Tanmoy Realy grt story. I couldnt cntrl myslf,tears cm ot frm my eyes.
Posted by Tanmoy Ths story is nicely arrangnd. This is the best story i hv ever read. I startd flng jealous 4ANDREW. Why dnt i get a bf? I jst imagined myslf as Andrew. It was realy grt. I was flng like am in heaven. God bles u,"writer"
Posted by Carlos I want him to Get with ryan ( the firefighter) he sounds fucking hot!!!
Posted by Josh That was brilliant! I hope that's not the last we see of Ryan though. Please post part two soon
Posted by David Bula Thanks guys for the positive feed back i really apriciate it...part 2 is under review now so keep an eye out.
Posted by Chad Please write the second part!! These characters seem so real and I want to know what happens. Thanks
Posted by JC I desperately need part three, please hurry
Posted by Josh OMG! actually the best story I have ever read! Can't wait for part 2
Posted by marcuz perfectly passionate piece of writing giving descriptive and vivid imagary of your story thoughtout !!!
Enjoyed reading it =]
Posted by *Chan Queen* This story... Absolutely captivated my my heart i loved it from begining to end.The begining very suspenceful with the bathroom scene the shooting and people screaming, it gave me a sympathetic, frightful feeling. I also loved the incorperation of the unexpecting army guy (Andrew) during the shooting. When Andrew needed help from will it gave off a sad but oddly fufiling vulnerability which drew the two closer. I knew something would spark when andrew tryed to help will. when the end came around it was gut wrenchingly romantic with the motel scene when will overcame his fear and gave in to andrew so sentamental! And the finishing line, brouht a tear to my eye. This is one of my favorite stories. The second i hope is just as good if not better. PS: i did not think much of the fireman although he does sound intreagueing. i just dont think Will would go out on Andrew unless he got lonely or impatient
Posted by Richard I love this story omg hurry and make the other parts i love your stories if you made a book i would read it
Posted by Richard I wish i had a boyfriend like that sodier guy andrew and have him love me and hold me so passionate i cant wait for part 2 you should make it into a movie i think it would be the best love movie ever
Posted by Ralph Abes Dear Mr. David,
I really love your stories. I'm amazed in your talent in writing. I think your stories worth reading for. I hope I can see a movie out of your stories. I'm really carried on by your story. I love the story of Mark and Adrian. I'm looking forward to your next stories. PS Do you have a Facebook account? I try finding you but there's a lot of David Bula in Facebook.
Yours Truly,
Ralph
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