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A harvest to rember reviews

Posted by chris fisher
the story has some truth to it but i'm not telling which bits. just a worning to any one rushing to join up to help withe the american harvest i dont think everyone is quite as easy going as the people in this story some back walter towns you might find your self haning from a tree they dont approve of gay sex. their loss
Posted by Ken
Good story. Needs a little help in the grammer department but all in all I liked the story. Please continue.
Posted by cas
Great story, thank you for sharing. It is done in a way that you can feel yourself going through the emotions of what the characters are fealing. Please, keep writing.
Posted by X
You know there are punctuation marks on your keyboard, right?
Posted by Francisco Mota
Full stops are your friends.
Posted by Nick
Thank You for what you wrote,I enjoyed it a lot.I am NOT sure why I want another guys dick,but I know I do.Thank You.
Posted by Larry Walls
It is a good story, but it is very difficult to read without punctuation in those long sentences. If you would get someone to help you edit your stories, I think you and your readers would be much happier. Larry
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