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Posted by Terkish
Nice....continue writing.
Guessed this is a true story?
Posted by chris fisher
the story has some truth to it but i'm not telling which bits. just a worning to any one rushing to join up to help withe the american harvest i dont think everyone is quite as easy going as the people in this story some back walter towns you might find your self haning from a tree they dont approve of gay sex. their loss
Posted by Ken
Good story. Needs a little help in the grammer department but all in all I liked the story. Please continue.
Posted by cas
Great story, thank you for sharing. It is done in a way that you can feel yourself going through the emotions of what the characters are fealing. Please, keep writing.
Posted by chris fisher
Sorry about the grammar but if I could read & write better I wouldn’t be working on a farm its not a bad life but have you seen how much we earn as workers. so I rely on spell check & grammar from Word you should see how bad it is before it has its work cut out. thanks for the feed back.
Posted by X
You know there are punctuation marks on your keyboard, right?
Posted by chris fisher
As you can tell I have never written before, the last time was at school & I didn’t pass the English exam & what I did learn has leaked out & is long forgotten.
For some time now the only thing I have to put pen to paper for is to sign my name no punctuation needed.
Part 2 has already been submitted so more bad grammar & lack of punctuation on its way, if it gets accepted. Sorry
Perhaps someone could help me put things in the right places for part 3, please let me know if you are willing to help. That’s if you want more of my ramblings.
Posted by tony
your story is so good that i forget i was in the classroom to read it.
thank you
Posted by Francisco Mota
Full stops are your friends.
Posted by FM
Hmm, sorry for being so impertinent, but yes, I think you need some help in the grammar department. I don't know how one goes about getting this help, but I suggest you do.
I couldn't read much of the story, long sentences confuse me :(
Posted by JD
I can't spell for shit and I also have piss poor grammar, so don't feel disheartened. I get my friend to read my stories (but they’re as bad as I am). Between us we don't do too badly, although people still tell me that it's bad. It will just take a little time and help for you to improve. Don't worry about it, your story is still very good.
Posted by FM
Finally managed to read it.
The story IS very good, congrats there. :)
Posted by Nick
Thank You for what you wrote,I enjoyed it a lot.I am NOT sure why I want another guys dick,but I know I do.Thank You.
Posted by Larry Walls
It is a good story, but it is very difficult to read without punctuation in those long sentences. If you would get someone to help you edit your stories, I think you and your readers would be much happier. Larry
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