Posted by scots58 Great story...well written. Made me feel like I was part of the story
Posted by FM Purely awesome.
You have made excellent improvements, and I believe that you are going to be able to do some more excellent works. Wonder if there's more? :P If not, wonder if you'll be writing any more? Anyway, 3
The story relaly connects with the reader. :)
Posted by Lee1746 this is a good story i sure hope that u countinue it on do the boys get to gather for evermore would like to know i like to read good storyes an this is a good one
Posted by Ken Great story. I hope there is more of what happens to these two guys. It seems like a good match.
Thanks
Posted by Paolo Marco nice story.. love the ending too... different from most of the stories here...
Posted by lucky Much better with the grammar. I think that using an editor is a good thing. Maybe you should do that with the next story as well. Looking forward to part 4
Alec then decided to join them. He ditched his cloths, waked over and put his cock in front of Rich’s mouth. Rich engulfed it greedily sucking like his life depended on it. Tyler continued to suck Rich’s thick cock...