Posted by Ethan good story, cant wait for part two
Posted by JM good story keep writing. but for the second part don't have so much sex. but more of what there going threw and emotion and stuff
Posted by Theo McLeod that is so sad and so awesome. i love this story. but how ever could it continue? quite the cliff hanger i suppose! great writing
Posted by nick great story cant wait to find out what happens next
Posted by Anonymous That was amazing! more pleaaaase
Posted by Kyle OMGsh. This story was as electrifyingly hott as it was unexpectable. The fantastic use of erotic figures of speeches made the story believable, enthralling the readers and making them want to blow their loads...and blow other things ;) Loved it, can't wait for its sequel!
Posted by Colin Thanks guys for the great comments and feed back I have received, I posted part two today and I hope you enjoy it as much as the first.