Posted by patrick j well holy shit... Fucking news reporters.. lets all say dipshit? This is an awesome fucking story.
Posted by Cod David I’ve read most of your stories;I find them magnificent considering the fact I’m unsatisfied and unappeased as a reader.Yet you left me speechless with your last one!It’s far from excellent,it’s superb and I believe I’m not sparing in compliments!Romantic,emmotional,sensitive and passionate!Its tittle speaks for itself:“all about love”!The main theme is the romance that evolves between two teenagers (Jack and Robbie) in the small town of Junctionville,a town which seems to be intollerant towards the “unconventional” sexual preferences,such is the love between two males!Without declining from this,it slips into another romance that eventuates in secret between two other teenagers (homophobic and prosecutor of the above and as expected concealingly homosexual) and likely the development of a love-affair between Jack’s and Robbie’s parents.From one part there we have loving,caring,affectionate,sensitive parents as Jack’s,Robbie’s and Billy’s,as opposed to Todd’s father,the city’s Sheriff a totally corrupted person dangerous,dissembler,intrigue and malign,determined to gain reelection in any cost and sworn in destroying all the obstacles including his own son!Not the ideal law-protector,neither the model exemplary father,primarily responsible for his son’s misconduct,aggressiveness and adversity!Nemesis eventually will prevail regardless of Sheriff’s intrigues!
I completely adore the shy and sensitive Robbie with the dynamic domminant affectionate Jack:they make a perfect match,one complements the other.Yet Jack as the domminant seems to be the top and I wonder when he’ll bottom for Robbie;after all Jack’s his instructor and most important he loves him so much!By the way I’m dying to find out the reason Robbie insulated in his private spot in the beginning of the story.
The story flows at ease and unhurriedly,with a captivating plot,while the reader is getting overexcited as the lines go by!Keep up the good work and give us the installment the sooner the possible.
Posted by David Green Thank you guys! Cod, without revealing to much, I can assure you that in the next chapter you will learn why Robbie is sitting alone down by the pond and that's all I'm saying!!! Stay Tuned :)
David G.
Posted by pak hey Davidyou are a fuking great ass author keep doin a great job and keeping intelectuals horny
Posted by krazie boy damn u know how to write good stories keep them comin aiight man can't wait till the next one
Posted by Michael Booker Very nice. I like the development between Todd and Billy as well as the two parents of the main characters. I really like how you went between each couple and making them different from each other. The ending really left anticipation for the next episode. Overall, great job.
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