Posted by Alexis Yay fiirst one to reviiew .!.!!.!.!.!!. ii loved iit!.!.!.!. Please contiinue and ii thiink he should go and liive wiith hiim.!!.!.!.!.!.! ii mean he iis riich!.!.!.! ii loved iit!.!.!.
Posted by Albert Hi Alexis, Since this is my first erotic story I have ever written and you are the first reviewer, I wanted to give my personal thanks to you for the review. I am so glad you liked it. You are my first official fan! :-) Albert (the author)
Posted by Devin Farmery Hey, Albert.
A good story, you write well. The ending was rather unexpected and out of context, but if you can make it work, then by all means do.
I do find Vanessa's part in the story an interesting one, but that is mainly because any other stories on this site with a female main character just feature them as the best friend, at most. I look forward to reading what happens between Tom and Albert and how their relationship changes and evolves. Good luck with future writing, I'll be waiting for part 2!
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