Posted by Aaron Wow, what an awsome story you have here. Do you think it will be continued, I'm sure a lot of people would love to see more, I know I would. Well, jsut wanted to say I think your quite the writer, and to keep on writing all these awsome stories.
Posted by Markysharky Dear David, An excellent story, which I have followed from part one. It has been a while since this story was posted, but please continue writing. I am sure that many readers want to see more, especially as this story is so well developed and eloquently written. It is a pleasant suprise to find a story that actually deals with both the emotional and physical sides of a relationship.
Posted by JD I'm new to this site and have found this story to be great. I think there are a lot of good writers on this site and you are one of the best. I have to say that I don't much like the Billy or Robbie in this story and I'm not sure why. There's just something about them. Something that we're not seeing. I know I must be wrong as I'm sure you wrote them to be very likable but I can't get pass this feeling. Maybe I just want them to bad or wrong or something not good, (my mind is working over time with story). Anyway, keep up the good work and I look forward to reading a lot more from you.
Posted by ryan You muat contunie with this story it is one of the most awesome stories I have ever read. YOu just can't leave us all with out an ending. Please get the next chapter out soon!!
Posted by bsk This is the BEST story i've ever read. The twists and turns at sudden moments keep you glued to the story and you can't get enough of it. So, when is the next installment coming? Eagerly waiting for the ultimate climax of this ultimate story!
Posted by Fox I know me and my gay pals *and some female friends of mine* love this story, its been awhile since its been update and we would really like to see an ending.
Posted by Boi wow... now that ending was unexpected....
Posted by Boi wow... now that ending was unexpected....
Posted by Boi wow... now that ending was unexpected....
Posted by Evilturtle are you going to bed All about love?? i would love to read more about it , its an awesome story so far...
Posted by Evilturtle are you going to write another chapter to *end* all about love i mean
Posted by Craig That was great, plz keep writing.
F'n wow, that was amazing. hurry w/ the next one,
i promise if you dont the anticipation will kill me!
LOL. keep up the good work.
Posted by Shane S Please don't leave it here, cried myself to sleep over this. Give us a happy ending please!
Posted by kamaki where is the continuation of the story, I am sooooooo anxious to read it!!!!
Posted by Christian Mr. David Green Your stories are great. I would like to tell you that i myself have only come out to some of my friends but not all of them thats when i found who my true friends are by knowing that the few i told two of them stopped talking to me and everyday i see them i am scared that they might tell everyone and hurt me. By feeling scared i can actually know how Robbie feels. so i would realy like to read more of your great work.
Posted by kamaki awwwwwwww no ending to the drama yet OMG I need to know how it ends!!!!
Posted by Kevin Please post the next chapter!! I need to know what happens with Jack and Robbie!! Please Please!!
Posted by nick blake i need to know the ending is jack and robbie going to be ok pls post the next chapter
Posted by Kamaki Where is the finally to all of this madness?????
Posted by Nigel It's been three years - PLEASE post the next chapter!
Posted by Devon omg! please! you have to finish this! please! lol i spent all day in class spacing out just reading all of this story! i cant just leave it here! i need to know what happens with jack and robbie! please write more! :)
Posted by CRISTOPHER LOPEZ OMG WHAT AN ENDIND FOR THIS STORY MY HEART WAZ BROKEN.... CANT WAIT TO SE WAT HAPPENS NEXT.. HAVE U MADE THE FOLLOWING CHAPTER?
Posted by Romeo I can't wait for the next chapter! I need to know what happens with all the characters, you just can't leave it here.
I need to see Todd crazy farther get send to the electric chair.
Finish the series man! Don't be like the other writers and leave the series unfinish.
Posted by kream hey where's the nest part david?
c'mon man we r waitin here...EAGERLY.....
Posted by Yoruichi Plz finish the series...it's been five years since you haven't written anything... come back n write plz!!
This chapter was posted on March 1st,2005 today is March 1st,2010
Posted by Rogue Please finish it, I really want to know what's going to happen. Please hurry.
Posted by Mike Guess he is not in the world anymore that's why he can't finish the story
Posted by Tye Am frantically searching for part xvi. This is actually more dramatic than my life... Dont bother apologizing for the delayed sex: every gay guy knows, sexdrama is better than sex. Am no writer but č the stories of my life are worth sharing. I would luv it if u would tell them on my behalf. Email me if u are interested!
Posted by RYAN PLZZZZZ FINISH THIS STORY
Posted by Will 3rd July 2011: PLEEEAAASE finish the story, you can't leave it like this with a dramatic cliff-hanger
Posted by Asher I hope David Green hasn't died ;( can't leave the story like this with such an unhappy cliffhanger. 10th August 2011
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