Another World 5 reviews

A bit of a disappointment compared to the other chapters in this story, I'm afraid.

So tell me, were you disappointed because it mostly had straight sex, or the story didn't interest you that much? If you were disappointed because of the straight sex, don't worry, there won't be a lot. If this story didn't interest you, maybe the event of the next chapter would pull you back in.

It was a disappointment because it wasn't as well written as the previous chapters of the story.

everything was perfect i liked the straight sex i mean it was awsome Great story

great story but why didn't you finish it wheres the next chapter i would really like to hear the rest of it does mark and danny end it so he can be with kenneth

I could have done without the st8t sex in chapter 5, but so far I have really enjoyed this story. All I want now is Danny and Marks Continuence. Please finish the Story.