Posted by Mike A bit of a disappointment compared to the other chapters in this story, I'm afraid.
Posted by Sebastien So tell me, were you disappointed because it mostly had straight sex, or the story didn't interest you that much? If you were disappointed because of the straight sex, don't worry, there won't be a lot. If this story didn't interest you, maybe the event of the next chapter would pull you back in.
Posted by Mike It was a disappointment because it wasn't as well written as the previous chapters of the story.
Posted by LO I think the hole story was great, almost the first chapters (2-4 they were so romantic an dsad, i was nearly crying), but this wasn't so good, but it shows, that Kenneth is a son of a bitch, who has used mark only for his own, but he shows emotions for a girl and thats for me the important part of this chapter!!
i'm exited for the nxt chapters, i'm waiting desesperatily!! Love LO PS: in chapter 4 or 3 you say van gogh is an french artist, thats wrong, he cames from the netherlands!! ok i'm eurpean i must know it :P !!
Posted by Xris everything was perfect i liked the straight sex i mean it was awsome Great story
Posted by nick blake great story but why didn't you finish it wheres the next chapter i would really like to hear the rest of it does mark and danny end it so he can be with kenneth
Posted by Shaun Not as good as da otha chapters but still amazing compared 2 da otha storys in this website. Ps cool fools is an amazing story i neva cry but ill admit that i did have sum tears in my eyes ur an amazing writer dont take 2 long 4 chapter 6.
Posted by Matt hurry with the next chapter of another world
great stories
Posted by Cherrie Please post the rest of this story, I'm very curious about the circumstances of Danny and Kenneth having sex with Mark tied to a chair espically with what happened in this chapter! I must say that while I don't really like reading straight sex it was nice to see Kenneth display some emotion toward another person.
Posted by #1 fan Please hurry and wriite the next chapter!
I wiish kenneth and mark would end up together!!!
I lovE thiis story
Posted by Indeed My Friend, Great Story! Indeed #1 Fan, indeed! I do hope Kenneth and Mark DO END UP TOGETHER! GREAT STORY, MY FRIEND! I will support you, as an author, up to the very end of your career. Best of luck monsieur!