Posted by Seth I loved it! Best one so far! Can't wait till the next one PLEASE HURRY!!!!!
Posted by Arun Torrentino Thank you Seth :) I'm in India for a few weeks (with the tiger) so there might be a slight delay with the next part. Glad you liked this one! Tried to give it my all. Arun T
Posted by Asher NOOOOOO Austin you retard! ;( and WOW, you got a tiger?! How and where? Btw, is this a true story?
Posted by Arun Torrentino Hey Asher, thanks for the review. I've just sent you an email that explains my relationship with someone called Austin in real life (I'd prefer not to post it where everyone can see it). And in answer to your question, yes I do really have a tiger now haha. Question for you now: your email address is londonmodelzone, so are you really a model?
Posted by Asher Yes I am :) are you taking the tiger back to the UK? And if you are how you gonna look after it.
Posted by Aliyaa This is awesome. Don't let Austin back that cheating sket. You write amazingly for a teenager x
Posted by Josh Wow! Fast becoming my favourite series. Please continue it.
Posted by Adam Wow. That was HOT. Aliyaa is right, don't let Austin back
Posted by Canishk Wow. Nearly creamed myself reading that. Great idea to use the grease in the pan lol- might try that myself. This is the point where most writers leave the story on an unhappy note. PLEASE don't do it! Continue
Posted by Claudio S Torrentino Wow!! (four wows in a row) NEXT PART PLEEEEEAAASE that was so freakin sexy!
Posted by loren i really like the story and cant wait for the next part, hope it comes soon i want to know wat happens next.
Posted by William Hey man you broke the wow chain :( ^ . that was awesome Mr T, please please please carry this on.
Posted by Arun Torrentino Thanks everyone. Currently writing the next part.
Posted by Asher Best bit of news this week
Posted by Kevin OMG I CANT WAIT FOR PART 4!!!!!! I know it is gonna be soo good already I can feel it! I just really hope that this story doesn't become like all the other ones on this site where authors write a story and say they're gonna continue writing more parts but they don't :(
Posted by Renard SO FUKEN AWESOME PLZ MAKE PART4
Posted by Raj Hi arun soon make the 4 th :-) how is ur tiger now where have you left it here in India or taken to Uk
whats his name(the tigers)
Posted by Arun Torrentino Thanks for the feedback everyone- the tiger is a girl and I've called her 'Sita", a very traditionally Indian name :) I'm leaving her in India whilst I go back but she'll be in England in around three months- so much paperwork and explaining to do lol.
Posted by Austin Awesome Mr T! Loved the little details like the cricket artcile etc. Please continue the series.
Posted by Richard HOT HOT HOT!!! Ahh the drama, the love the sex, this has the makings of an awesome series
Posted by Raj Hope you will find perfect Rama for her in uk lol :-)
dont send her for forest :-)
Posted by Zac Oh my god! If that was any hotter my computer would have caught fire. I like the fiery sex juxtaposed with the tenderness between the two characters. Please please forgive Austin? And don't stop writing now, this has such great potential :)
Posted by Alex This was brilliant. Cannot wait for the next part. Please don't stop the story here!
Posted by Arun Torrentino Just submitted part 4 :)
Posted by Raj Great buddy thanks:-)
Posted by Kev This is soo good! When is the site gonna update so we can read part 4?!! :(
Posted by Alexandros Wow!!! This was really good! I can't believe someone still in middle school can write a story of such intensity and description! Good job. Keep doin what you're doin.
Posted by David You're still in middle school?!! jeeze..definitely agree with all the comments Arun. Your creativity is nothing short of genius (where did you get the grease from the pan idea?!) I hope you don't lose interest in this series, but please consider making another one. I'll be sure to rate this one at least a 9.
Posted by Todd I check the site every day for part 4 and it's still not here :( great new series, lots of potential. Thumbs up Mr Torretino.
Posted by Mike Stunning story Arun Perfect blend of drama, affection and extremely graphic sex Made me feel I was there doing it with you Look forward to next installment in series How do the Customs guys like your tiger? LOL Mike
Posted by Arun Torrentino Submitted my new story. It's called 'The Stranger' when the site updates check it out and let me know what you think