Posted by Jorge Wow, its about time he told him he cheated.
Love it keep writing. When ever I read this I feel like its real life.
Posted by Chris ..yeah your stories are awesome! i am so addicted :D
u need to write more. i'm dying to see what happens next
Posted by Mason more more more
Posted by Romeo Write mor! I dieing to see how it turns out.
It's about time he told Michael he cheated, but, he nees to tell the whole story.
Please finish, it seems so real and emotional. Not like all the others stories that tries to sound real.
Posted by sammy dude great story you should finish it soon
Posted by Abel this story is awsome, i want to know what happens next.
Posted by justin these stories are amazing seriously its probably the best story ever. i think you should never end the series, im so addicted
Posted by Bryn Harding Really beautiful, deep, emotion filled stories. They have been a pleasure to read. I'd love to read more, but feel that the story is perfect as it is. Real credit to you, there fantastic x
Posted by J.B this one's GREAT !!!! , we'll be WAITING FOR THE PART 8,9,10 ...... PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE !!!
Posted by Lamont Ok plz hurry and keep going with this story. and plz oh plz i hope that jake and micheal get back together.
Posted by Arun Wow! Didn't expect him to actually own up! Great twist :) pu wrote beautifully- please keep the stories coming