Posted by Cris Please continue the story, I like it so far
Posted by kurk yes... you should continue... its sound like a great story!!
Posted by Simon Waters Keep writing mate!
Posted by Michael Sheridan Good beginning; you should definitely continue.
Posted by Brian awwe i liked it
u mixed up their names a few times what was quiet confusing lol but awesome plot though
and maybe u should put more teasing from kyles side into it.. you know he's the righ beverly hills guy and thinks everybody is falling for him.. idk
still i just hope u continue coz ur really talented
Posted by Aaron You better continue this story..Its rare to find a love story here...So GO!!WRITE THAT STORY!
Posted by Pietro Ya, please continue as soon as posible, and please at least put some sex, it could be nicer, love and sex its like bun and sausage put together there u go, nice hotdog!! Nice plot and story.
Posted by Timothy Continue continue, you need to continue with this love story I like it I hope u write more soon
Posted by Hawk Lyra Good story, but in the cuming stories, do not be afraid to add some sex scenes.
Posted by Percy baum Yessss and hurry like imedately
Posted by Taylor wow... its rare to see a love story on here... its rly good you should definitely continue
Posted by Tyler Smith @Everybody Thanks for the support....I had already submitted the 2nd part before you all commented so alas there is still no sex scene in it too..but the third part which I am currently penning is kinda inclined more towards sex..... Keep reading....and thanks again!!!
Posted by Phillip Waiting for the 3rd part then!!! lols Read the first two parts.good going.
Posted by Laura this is really goos, i think you should carry on, i am really starting to like this. :D
Posted by Thulk Yes pliz