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Posted by dave
wat the fuck was that, it was a complete rip off of the "big brother" show and a bad one at that. there is nothing going on for this story and little part that has any sexual contents is poorly written and was rushed i'll be surpised if anyone finds this story a turn on. u need to add a hell of alot more detail to the sex and make the storyline more beleieveble wouldn't it be more realistic that one of guys just came on to another guy with out the tv show people in the jurnal room tell the guy to come onto james! learn how to write!
Posted by tony
hey, i liked it.
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