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Posted by Mikey
Not bad Jake. Little inconsistant bud. Slow it down some and proof your work. I can't emphasize that enough to the writers. Like I stated before, I do miss things myself. But take time. You have potential to tell a good story. But you need to spell check and take your time. Nurture your gift. Part 2, done right could be really good. No need to rush. A good two or more page story can be a great read! Keep up the good work! :)
Posted by Jake
Heh. Sorry my first story, I tried to make it as error proof as I could. I dont have word or spell check so I gotta be extra careful in typing, so if theres a mistake sorry. Part 2 will be out but ive been busy so it should show up sometime next week, when I can just sit down and worry only about writing. Thanks again.
Posted by Mark R Lyon
OH MY GOD THAT WAS THE HOTTEST THING I HAVE EVER READ YOU HAVE THE TALENT OF A PRO PLEASE WRITE MORE JUST LIKE THIS ONE IT EVEN MADE ME HOT AND BOTHERED AND MY HEART ALMOST SKIPPED A BEAT!!!!
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