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Posted by Cris
I just looked at the story and I'm sorry for all the typos, I was tired when I wrote it. Plus it's hard to type a stoty on an iPhone
Posted by Mason
okay... im pretty confused now
it this part 2 or part 3 coz idk but when i click onyour profile there happen to be two storys for part 2 lol
& honestly i couldnt quite follow...
but i really love both characters 3
Posted by Romeo
I'm kinda confuse about the last 2 parts, is it all part 2 or parts 2 and 3?
I think it's a good start but your chapters need to be longer and more detailed. I can't really give you much because your chapters are over before I get interested in them.
Take your time, tell a story with more details with physical and emotional descriptions and you will have a good series. That's my advice so far.
Keep going, it's a good start.
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