But You Said You Loved Me reviews

Hey this is great, and there is just the perfect amount of sex. In your next story you should make it a bit more awkward or something for them, if you get what i mean, or like one of them wanting it really bad but feeling really guilty or something i dunno. But over all it was great.

You were very upfront and the story line passed too fast... Also work on your grammar; but other than that it was good.

MMM Nice story , all guys should get the real thing instead of all those girls getting all thev nice guys first lol xx