Posted by Michael Booker You always stop at the good part. I'm intrigued.
Posted by Cod I couldn't agree more with Michael!It gets more and more fair,episode by episode!Hurry up with the next part!
Posted by Cod I feel quite honored if i can give you ideas,regarding the development of your story!Take as much time it's nessessary for you to reach and give us the best of it!I completely delectate the fact that you present Kelly so cool,tough and brave towards the bruttal and bully,yet so deadly hot,jock football captain Wyatt Kaplan!I think this is the reason that Kelly gets so irresistable,pretty and charming in the eyes of the stud and muscouline Wyatt,to the point of begging Kelly at any cost to have sex with him!And Wyatt is far the most desired guy in the school that bedded every girl!All Kelly has to do is name a price,his price,for some hedonistic moments with him!Kelly's responce to this offer was to slap the arrogant bastard!It's rightful though to claime and take the higher price,Wyatt's arse virginity,taking into account what kind of a vain and desperate for male to male sex jerk he's!Anywise I can hardly wait for the next chapter!
Posted by Kat I'm hooked and can already see the many many angles open for this story to develop. I hope it's not all about Wyatt getting into Kelly and that it. Look forward to the next installment which I hope isn't the last.
Posted by Ian K. Kat, I want the two characters to have a deeper, more meaningful relationship that trascends just sex. You & I are on the same page! Thank you all for the nice comments! It means a lot to me. I will be posting part 4 very soon. I already have most of worked out in my head. Michael, as a fan of your Detention series, I am especially grateful for your praise! And Cod, I have a surprise for you in part 4...
Posted by Cod That's the point,Ian my friend!Besides as I've aleady told,It isn't all abouy sex,actually,it's all about love,that is so rear in our days!I can hardly wait for the installment and certainly your
surprise which I have the feeling I'll delectate for sure!Hope to hear from you the sooner possible!
Posted by sam I love this story, I just hope that it turns into something more than just sex.
Please make it longer next time, or add some more detail coz I can't stand the suspense.
Posted by Ian K. I posted part 4 on Sunday in the wee morning hours. It should be up in a few days!
Posted by me Like I said..it seems to take a few days for stuff to become renewed, but that's life.