Posted by Admin Dear Dylan! We approved your story (and also can talk what your russian is good - as it our native language) - but please in future give the translation from russian to english in text. Like for example "Mishka poshel v sad (Mishka go to the garden)" Ok? Best Regards,
Alex
Posted by John Slater Great story, hope the next episode appears soon, would have liked to have seen the russian remarks translated, all the best, John
Posted by Jimmy Gordon Dylan,
Wow, what can I say? Great character development. I like Chris, and I wish I were in his Berkenstocks. Or maybe I wish I were in his...well enough of that!
I'm also impressed that your writing goes beyond eroticism, and is actually written with some care and craftmanship. Your sentence structure is excellent, and your style is involving and compelling. I'm gonna ask you if you wouldn't mind reading a couple of my stories. I would value your opinion if you care to offer it to me. I'm not looking for complements, as you know they come easily on this site. I want feedback from an accomplished author of the same genre.
The two lovers took a step back and watched the sea below. They stood in overwhelming silence and awe. The shark had a mission and what it was wasn't exactly clear at this point...