Posted by steve what a great story, i love it made me real hot.
Posted by Johansen This story was good, but you could of added more details into it to make it a little more interesting. Then again it was good!
Posted by Mike Total shite - poorly written, predictable and boring.
Posted by Calvin You had a good premise...but you wrote it really badly and made it sooooooooooo unrealistic...what are the chances that ur neighbour's son comes over on Christmas morning and just happens to like you and just happens to want sex? Kinda disappointing, really, but...there's potential, I guess...
Posted by John I really enjoyed this story, it made me cry a little bit, well done i have to agree with the others though you actually had a good starting base but towards the main body content and the end of the story it went sloppy and sour a part from that well done.
I think you should of just re- read it and tried to edit it.
When a man can have any other person he wishs, he finds one that he would trade it all away for, and their darkest secrets are brought forth, and it only brings them closer together...