Posted by david pavlick this is one of the best written stories i have seen on this site. the characters are well formed and the setting descriptions vivid. the sex descriptions are sensual but not over-written. good, good job. the only criticism is that it is a little long for this venue.
Posted by John Paul Too long? Nonsense! Regardless of the venue, this work is simply phenomenal. Your descriptions are incredible, your character development is thorough, and your portrayal of emotions is incredible. Erotic literature is more than just sex; it is an art just like all other genre of literature. If I want cheap, thoughtless thrills, I'd watch porn. Keep up the exceptional writing, Jimmy. I look forward to seeing more great work coming from you.
Posted by David G. Jimmy:
You are probably the most romantic writer of erotic fiction that I have seen in a long time. The story and the characters leaped out at me and kept me wanting more. I love your style my friend!
David G.
Posted by Paul Belloni This story is romantic, but it is also fucking hot. The sex is raw and jarring. Good work Mr. Gordon.
Posted by Kevin Chou Mr. Gordon
I really love your story
It's romantic and sensual
It's more than a sex story
Keep working
Posted by VC fuck me
Posted by evan Its a great story... Hmm... I wonder did Jimmy Gordon had this experience for real or..?? I think the story have a great details and it makes me drown onto it...
Nice job!
Posted by paul It does feel like you've been there. And it's true you write well -- such a pleasure, to get sensitivity and sensuality and strength and heat all in the same place. Thanks, and keep it UP!