Posted by Ken That was a good start. I'll be waiting for the next part.
Posted by Jimmy M. Good Mate- a good start to a nice story, maybe to quick to the action though- Just something to think about- Thanks
Jimmy
Posted by Brad Stout This was great please keep writing. Thanks BS (college Sph)
Posted by Jordan like it alot write more please
Posted by Ron Hot story, love to hear more.definitly has room for some hot twists in the story line
Posted by todd Nice story. I can't wait for part two.
Posted by Baron that was one of the best stories I've ever read. Believe me when me and my throbbing dick say we will be waiting for the next part!
Posted by Jack Aesome.... cant wait for the next one!!!
Posted by mike that waz awesome i can't wait 2 hear the next one
Posted by Warren I enjoyed what you wrote.Did you really have sex wiith your roommate?that sounds good,to me.
Posted by Joshua Come on. write more please!!!
Posted by Hugh Hot, but a little rushed...
and there were lots of spelling mistakes which can sometimes detract from it!
Posted by adam what a great story
He moved closer to me and whispered: “Quite erotic, isn’t it”. I was too flustered to answer him. At that time, the snake grabbed another mouse. Robert moved even closer to me, almost touching me...