Posted by L. E. Why was this submitted as 8 different stories? Reading it was INCREDIBLY annoying. The story itself was pretty darn good, but make it all one story next time!
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Posted by J are you going to make a chapter 9?
Posted by Aceith-CJ kirk. it was annoying to read as i had to keep going back to your profile but im very sure you were eager and trying to make us happy. it would have felt more "full" if you made 1 chapter with 4 pages, and then another. as for the story i liked it..but one chapter i read..it could of been gone and nobody would of noticed. nothin happened. but you got pontentiol. i liked it. keep up the good work!
feel free to email me for..well whatever. My rateing: 8
Sincerely, CJ Kirk. (F.llicious)
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Posted by Shaun Awesum loving story one of the best here plz continue with chapter 9
Posted by Hawk Lyra Hott story! Well written and had a great sex scene. I only wished Damien would've fucked julian. (Hey an idea for #9)
Posted by Romeo I really like the series but the chapters could have been longer. You could have 2 or 3 chapters into 1 with several pages, it was really annoying going through 1 page cahpters!
I hope you're going to write a chapter 9 because I think it's unfinish. It really doesn't say finish. I mean do they go their seperate ways, stay friends, or become a couple? Do they become roommates in college, hey may be that could be your next series on this story? A series on their college life.
Good series but needs to be finish.
Posted by Cherrie I really enjoyed the story, the way you had the characters progress was totally beliavable. I did hate that each chapter was one page cause some of them could of been combined. I hope to see a chapter 9, 10..etc!
Posted by Gary OMG, this was the best story that I have read on this site. The love making scene was incredible. It was as if I was there watching them, feeling their heat. Maybe one more chapter were Damien shows him some more tricks. GOOD JOB!