Posted by Mike An absolutely brilliant story - really well written. I can't wait to read what happens next - please don't make us wait too long!!!
Posted by Michael Sheridan Ok, I'm hooked! This looks like the beginning of a great story. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Posted by Andy This is really good! Are you planning to keep it going? I'm waiting for a second installment.
Posted by Levi Great story. Thank you so much for writing something that doesn't automatically begin with sex. Loved the character build up. Can't wait for the second installment. Like Mike said please don't keep us waiting for too long.
Posted by Ken I love this story already. The story and writing is excellent. I can'twait to read the next part.
