Posted by Mike THis is such a brilliant story ... beautifully written - tender and moving. Can't wait to read what happens next!!
Posted by chad man you really have to continue with this. this is really good.
Posted by justareader ooooohhhh my GOSH!!!! please hurry the next installment. i cant wait to see what happens!!!
Posted by red wow, i cant wait for the next part! damn, nice story! keep it up! if its ok, pls e-mail me if the next part is already out. thanks!
Posted by Andy Even better than the last one! Please! Keep them coming!
Posted by john brilliant story, you obviously have alot of talent, keep 'em coming.
Posted by Ken This story just keeps getting better all the time. This is an amazing story, please write more soon.
Posted by Jac Amazing story
Posted by CoreyDillon Ugh I hate you you made me cry lol!
My wife Susan never trusted him, his dark brooding good looks set off her internal alarms. He set off alarms in me, too, but I didn't understand their meaning at the time...
