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Posted by Sebastien
I'd like to apologize to everyone who felt the storyline of this chapter was inadequate. I got carried away with the extremely long sex scene, and couldn't find enough inspiration to write actual plot. I'll blame it on my schoolwork, but I hate to let you guys down.
Chapter Nine will indeed be the last installment, and I promise the story will end in a fun and exciting way, with interesting throwbacks to the first couple of chapters (Plus, Woody and Ethan actually have sex outside their bedroom!)
Posted by p.rivers
EXCELLENT!!! it was still good even though u consider it rushed. dont rush the last one though...make it your best yet. looking forward to it.
Posted by Ken
I have really enjoyed this story tremendously. It has got to be one of the best written stories on this site. You said you are in high school and that's even more amazing. Your writing is more mature beyond your age.
You have an amazing talent that could take you far. Don't lose it. You haven't let me down as far as I'm concerned. This has been an excellent story so far. All though sad to see it end. At least it will end unlike so many stories on tis site.
Posted by Sebastien
haha. oops. i don't know why i typed 'high school'. i'm actually in college. no, i don't think my story would have been up to this quality if i were in high school. (but my other story, Another World, was indeed written during high school)
Posted by wow500
You are good!
This/these stories are A+ work. But please dont feel pressed for time on them... Let your artwork have time to flow from you onto the keyboard... I dont mean put this before school, but just take your time...(Micheal Booker has been on the same story for about a year)LOL---I think all of us agree we can wait a couple weeks for greatness ;)
Posted by Matt
I think that this story event though it is fiction ii am in awe as the writer did made the story come alive
Posted by Xris
omg OMG and i mean totally OMG LOL your stories are great it has everything i mean i can acttually make out the images in my head and the (oh so many) emotions you put in to the characters are so perfect. I truly enjoy your work and i cant wait to read the final story.
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