Posted by John write more, that was really great
Posted by Alan meegan Hey august very hot story just busted a nut readin it ! Keep dem comein
Posted by kaell great story
Posted by SWeathers Good story I always like to see a bitch get fucked:)
Posted by Dalton Peters plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue!
Posted by nektarios plzz keep writing
Posted by nate dont stoppppp
Posted by charlie hey i loved it
Posted by kale dude i need 2 kno what happens between them
Posted by kiser ur amazing
Posted by chris Hot shit u no I want more
Posted by John This is sooo good I love plz continue
Posted by JOEY CONTINUE!
Posted by Jamie It's great pppls continue
Posted by danny continue for sure :)
Posted by latinmix Damn! What a hot story. Please continue. =)
Posted by Chad You should continue
Posted by jay post some more on this subject it is great thanks
Posted by Denys Pls continue...it's very nice, Aug
Posted by Alex I like it :D
Posted by Gabriel hey you should continue ur story so hot!!!
Posted by albert continue
Posted by HRH Bob Windsor This is so fucking hot.
Posted by Bfjsh Keep going.
Posted by John Pascoe Yes please continue the story, it's great ;)
Posted by Steve CONTINUE !
Posted by Jim Great Story, turned me on readin it
Posted by david lamarche plz continue this stories is so good
Posted by Tom Very good! I loved it :)
Posted by john continue
Posted by alexander please continue
Posted by joseph great
hope for the next one
Posted by Richard Really good
Posted by kev love the sorry mate this has got to be contined mate
Posted by Joseph PLEASE FORGET ABOUT THE 10 REVIEWS! JUST CONTINUE THE STORY!
Posted by Joe You should continue, it was really good.
Posted by VV Cool! You should continue!
Posted by Mark I really like the story until it was cut! Come on aug ur story is so hot! Keep writin,that's the best story i've ever read on here,i want to know what's next,.i like the flow of story,it keeps me harder and harder and it goes,come on,please continue it! Im a big fan of urs when it comes on here.continue please
Posted by TweedleD OMG. I love this. I feel like i am you.
Posted by rj hey dude,,
when did this happen :)?
Posted by Alex and a 4thgrader Please cotinue the story I liked it and Alex asked why did you write the story
Posted by Bran This story was scary in the beggining. But it ended up passionate. You should really continue. It was very interesting. I like your name by the way too. :)
Posted by Fait Accompli Keep it up, I'm interested to see where your going with this. Nice start by the way. Good Job!
Posted by August Rutherford Umm, for you guys, I'm not really sure when did this happen, but it was like a month ago. I wrote the story because I want other people to know how my first time was - tragic. Well they are nice people though. Thanks for the continue stuff. =]
The continuation will be submitted next week, I still have to write 3000 more words to make the second page.
Posted by mike b very hot story keep up the good work
Posted by Jared R I love it. Keep it up!
Posted by Hank Keep goin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)
Posted by August Rutherford Ok guys, I posted the continuation of the story. Its entitled "Crush force fucks me! "Anger, Sex and Drama". Optional: In order to feel the drama, you have to look up youtube the songs "Like A Knife" and "A Twist In My Story" both by Secondhand Serenade.
Posted by Alexx continue ( : ?
Posted by Amit Dats realy good luking 4werd 4 part 2
Posted by Andrew I loved it, considering that I had sex with my jock friend. Please continue.
Posted by cj please continue
Posted by MattieCole finish the story. (: I thought it was really good. For a while it kinda scared me. But then it actually got realy good.
Posted by kevin yes...brillliant story
Posted by marshall Freakin Great!!
Posted by tay you should boy that was sso hot
Posted by atoniostokes continue!
Posted by jason Do moree its making me soo fucking horny plz ugh I can just jack off right now and cum
Posted by Ty Hey very good story I would love to read more!
Posted by luis you should contineu
Posted by Jean Philippi Cab I love your story. I want to read the 3rd part.Thank you
Posted by Adrian This is hot and it would be Kool to. Hear the ending
Posted by E More, continue
Posted by Nick Omg that's so fucking hot!!!!!
Posted by t.bone keep going, this is fcking hot!!!!!!!
Posted by rhaf hope you wil keep on continuing your story . . . Nice.
Posted by gairy fairy I LOVE IT!!!
Posted by mitchell more more more this stuff is hot
Posted by Jakee Its a really interesting story. You should continue.
Posted by Jakee :-) CONTINUE PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by max the best
Posted by Gayboy69 You should continue. Its hot.