Posted by jack good story but maybe it could be made longer by adding more detail.
Also seperate the actual speaking text from the story, I find it easier to understand
Posted by powow nice story... just make it longer the next time... can't wait for the next part...
Posted by Jared this is great i love the ones that use dads and son if you know a story send it to me at cloudyboy13@yahoo.com hope you enjoyed it as much as i did
Posted by daddysrimmingson WOW. Love that story. Even though the end was a bit abrupt. Love the dad-fucks-son-bit. Wanna see more...