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Posted by Patrick J
I agree with Sean and Lisa. This is an awesome story. If Chris needs to get away, bring him into Atlanta Georgia and put me is part of the story! Ill try to make him feel better!! :-D
Posted by mark
awwwww nearly had me in tears at the end of that one. like the way it was done from chris's point of view. please get them back together soon.
Posted by Kat
I really didn't like Chris, I thought he was a jerk and was besides myself with joy when he and B broke up, but this story changed all that, it brought home just why I never liked Chris in the first place. I really clicked with Chris here, reminded me of me in the early days. I can now relate with Chris and hope that unlike in my case he doesn't end up alone or go and get himself into trouble. As usual mate this was another goodie and I take back all I said about ending the series when they broke up, I can't wait for more.
Posted by Michael B
I just make it up Lisa. Sometimes inspiration from people I know, my own life, some of my favorite movies or shows, whatever. I just try to make it so that I really know the characters, what they're about, and then it's kinda easy to make storylines for them
Posted by paolo marco
same here lisa... i'm starting to have anxiety attacks whenever i go here and don't find the next chapter... haha just kidding... but seriously, i'm really waiting for the next chapter...
Posted by sean
team chris
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