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Posted by everyone
U HAVE TO FINSIH THE NEXT StorY SOON!!!
Posted by Mike
OMG!!!! That was great!!!!!! Once again you wrote a great story. I just wish u got it out sooner! Well all i ask is that Chris and Brandon are together in the end. (Actually I hope there never is an end) Again it was great
P.S. Hurry up with 14!!!!
Posted by Lisa
All I have to say is damn!!!, I can't take the anticipation anymore. I hope that chris and brandon get back together. Not in the last story, but in the next one. This is really keeping me on the edge of my seat
Posted by ryan
WOW! I can't believe B actually did it with Luke. I thought for sure that he's going to reject Luke after that phone call to Chris. I guess it adds more drama to the story. Please hurry up and fnish 14. I have to know what happened next.
Posted by CalZ386
Wow, amazing like always. I can so picture this story being a movie.. The way you switch inbetween scenes and all that creative stuff. Kinda reminds me of the movie called The Rules of Attraction (Ian Somerhalder is hot) hehe anyways, awesome chapter. cant wait till 14.
Posted by Lisa
you know there is a on going series on this site. the "I love cory" series, and they are up to 23 or 24, something like that. So who is to say you have to stop @ 15? You have everyone hooked, so just keep on writing.
Posted by Cod
Thank you Michael,this episode left me plain breathless;I sincerely admit it simply worthed waiting!Every chapter gets fairer than the anterior;I don’t know how you attain this,the distinctions of merits reside veraciously,preclusively,unavoidably and rightfully to you and your splendid and eminent talent though!
There’re two new people in the story both attractive and yet veiled with mystery that come across to each of the main characters:Eve and Aaron!I must avow that Chris turns out more and more prepossessing,particularly since he abjures to yield in the siren and tempting Aaron,mere because he’s confident and assured that he’s got another chance,perhaps the uttermost,with B,which is glazed not to scuttle.Chris from the beginning,albeit constantly and stubbornly refused to unbosom and confront his true feelings towards B,remained and still stays loyal to him!I’m afraid that only Chris substantiated his love for B,while Brandon is unable to repulse the temptations and remain faithful physically and mentally to Chris,as his affairs with Jason and Luke unveil.I’m curious to see his reactions if he figures out or suspects that B failed to answer the phone,just because he was having sex with Luke!Frankly I have difficulty in comprehending his capricious and whimsical behavior!
Hopefully to reed the installment the sooner possible,for one more time,I solicit you to keep up the story for a very long period of time and not end it in just two episodes;this won’t be unfeasible for you!Cheers
Posted by Ian
I hope that brandon and chris get back togther. Just let brandon and luke fuck, then let chris and this aaron fuck, then chris comes back home to get back with brandon.
You can't keep them apart, they are made for each other.
Posted by Joe
Stop your whining! Give the dude a break. Michael cranked out 4 pages instead of the casual 2. The man has a life too, ya know. He is doing this out of his own free time for you ungrateful brats.
Michael- Mad props to you. You're obviously very talented. What else can I say that hasn't already been said about you? Keep up the great work. I really want Brandon and Chris back together soon, but the author knows best. Although I do wonder why Brandon is in love with Chris. All they pretty much do is fuck. Anyways, I love your stories dude!
Posted by paolo marco
this story just made me completely hungry for the next part... i think you got a really nice story going on, besides the whole chris-brandon storyline, you still got lots of subplots that could still be explored... keep up the good work michael...
anywayz... so how does it feel to have so many fans huh? =P
Posted by Brianna
Just like Marco said you do have alot of supblots that can be explored. So we never know where you are going with the story you keep us on our toes. Great job, but anyway you never disappoint us. Can wait for the next.
Posted by Dave
I've read quite a few stories on this site - at least it feels like it - but i've never been interested enough to read an entire series in one go, at least not until i read this one! it's incredible, and you really are a talented writer. i don't want 2 bug u or anythin, but plz plz plz write the next one soon - i can't wait to find out what happens next!
Posted by Lisa
Did you forget about us :)
Posted by Michael Booker
No, I haven't, 14 will be ready soon.
Posted by Lisa
I was just kidding, you do have a life, don't mean to be a nag....was just messing around.
Posted by Marcus
This is my first time reviewing for your series, even though I've been reading each and every one of them. And damn! You can really write. I hate it that Brandon, and Chris broke up, but hey, he should go after Scott, or Jason. Or even Luke. So keep it up, and please submit 14 soon. I really hopw you haven't forgot about us.
Posted by Nina
OMG.Please don't make chris have sex with that slut Aron!OMG he is a slut!Jerk and an ass hole!
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