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Posted by .........................
Great Story Dude........... Keep It Up :D
Posted by Ian
LOVED IT. keep up the good work.
Just wondering if this was gonna be the last part or are you gonna do a last one where we see if they get back together?
I wanna see Brandaon and Chris make up and have wild passionate hot sex. Just to end it really well
Posted by Kayn
AMAGAD...i'm sooooo happy that things are finally working out ^_^ all i can say to you it "OMG" you are proberly the best writter on this site. no joke. Dude you rock! keep the stories comming. XD
Posted by BookerFan
awww the ending was sweet. loved it. good job
Posted by Cod
At last the long expected episode is in our hands and eyes and I must confess it worthed waiting for more than 6 weeks for the installment of the story. It chagrins me deeply the fact though that in an episode or two this fair story will conclude. It kept us in alertness and vigilance,making us so fucking emmotional and shit- as Chris would have annotated- for more than 7 months,but in all good things there comes an end, yet for one last time I plead you to linger this end!
There’re many parts of the plot that I really delectated.Chris and Brandon abjured to yield in the siren and tempting Aaron and Luke respectively just because they have strong feelings for each other and want to give their affair another chance,which perhaps is the uttermost.And they were quite a temptation both (Aaron and Luke I mean, with their exquisite good looks) and consindering the fact that Chris and Brandon didn’t have sex for almost two weeks didn’t help them much either!Yet the last minute they manage to stay loyal to each other.Tempting Aaron prooves to be the voice of consciousness and reason for Chris and due to him he admited and realized many things that involve his relationship with Brandon.And we have another great love story in process that of Jason and Billy,which we all suspected,since you gave us hints,yet with no further details!They seem to really like each other;yet there are two shadows in their relationship.Although Jason seem to be sincerely in love with Billy,he unfortunately remains physically attracted to Brandon,howbeit he didn’t forgive him.As for Billy,which show us a sensitive, more considerate and insecure sight of his character well hidden behind his asshole, stupid jock stereotype that he tries so hard to maintain,finally we understand the reason for his animosity towards Brandon,an enmity that grew stronger,deeper and more intense episode by episode.Brandon is his opponent regarding to Chris,he envies him because he became so important and significant to Chris that drew all his affection and attention.This expounds his bitter and ironic comments and behavior towards Brandon and his joy when Chris broke up with him.He feels that Brandon stole his friend,although I didn’t figure out how far he was willing to take that friendship,I mean if he wants to be more than friends with Chris.Yet the night that Chris really and desperately needed him he turned away from him,he didn’t even listen to him and although there’s no sign from Chris all day he doesn’t bother to look for him.Not the ideal best friend a person would want to have!We even have a worried to death Brandon who doesn’t hesitate (knowing Billy’s obvious rancor against him) to call Billy and seek for Chris,to the point of concindering going to Chris’ house. And finally after 7 long months and 14 longer chapters Chris at last accepts his love for Brandon indirectly (naturally):in his own words “I don’t know...maybe...I guess...I think so...” But the most important part is that he really feels that way!Well that’s a start,I hope it won’t take him another 14 episodes to openly admit it.On the other hand that would have been a splendid idea!I don’t want to put any more pressure to you though;just take any time you need to go on with the story.
Contradicting emotions left me after running through with the story:delight and joy for reeding a new chapter after so long,concern and curiosity for the installment and affliction and melancholy that this sublime story is most likely near to its ineluctable telos.For all these feelings and many more thank you mate!
Posted by Cod
At last the long expected episode is in our hands and eyes and I must confess it worthed waiting for more than 6 weeks for the installment of the story. It chagrins me deeply the fact though that in an episode or two this fair story will conclude. It kept us in alertness and vigilance,making us so fucking emmotional and shit- as Chris would have annotated- for more than 7 months,but in all good things there comes an end, yet for one last time I plead you to linger this end!
There’re many parts of the plot that I really delectated.Chris and Brandon abjured to yield in the siren and tempting Aaron and Luke respectively just because they have strong feelings for each other and want to give their affair another chance,which perhaps is the uttermost.And they were quite a temptation both (Aaron and Luke I mean, with their exquisite good looks) and consindering the fact that Chris and Brandon didn’t have sex for almost two weeks didn’t help them much either!Yet the last minute they manage to stay loyal to each other.Tempting Aaron prooves to be the voice of consciousness and reason for Chris and due to him he admited and realized many things that involve his relationship with Brandon.And we have another great love story in process that of Jason and Billy,which we all suspected,since you gave us hints,yet with no further details!They seem to really like each other;yet there are two shadows in their relationship.Although Jason seem to be sincerely in love with Billy,he unfortunately remains physically attracted to Brandon,howbeit he didn’t forgive him.As for Billy,which show us a sensitive, more considerate and insecure sight of his character well hidden behind his asshole, stupid jock stereotype that he tries so hard to maintain,finally we understand the reason for his animosity towards Brandon,an enmity that grew stronger,deeper and more intense episode by episode.Brandon is his opponent regarding to Chris,he envies him because he became so important and significant to Chris that drew all his affection and attention.This expounds his bitter and ironic comments and behavior towards Brandon and his joy when Chris broke up with him.He feels that Brandon stole his friend,although I didn’t figure out how far he was willing to take that friendship,I mean if he wants to be more than friends with Chris.Yet the night that Chris really and desperately needed him he turned away from him,he didn’t even listen to him and although there’s no sign from Chris all day he doesn’t bother to look for him.Not the ideal best friend a person would want to have!We even have a worried to death Brandon who doesn’t hesitate (knowing Billy’s obvious rancor against him) to call Billy and seek for Chris,to the point of concindering going to Chris’ house. And finally after 7 long months and 14 longer chapters Chris at last accepts his love for Brandon indirectly (naturally):in his own words “I don’t know...maybe...I guess...I think so...” But the most important part is that he really feels that way!Well that’s a start,I hope it won’t take him another 14 episodes to openly admit it.On the other hand that would have been a splendid idea!I don’t want to put any more pressure to you though;just take any time you need to go on with the story.
Contradicting emotions left me after running through with the story:delight and joy for reeding a new chapter after so long,concern and curiosity for the installment and affliction and melancholy that this sublime story is most likely near to its ineluctable telos.For all these feelings and many more thank you mate!
Posted by kai
loved it your a good writter
Posted by Amish
Splendid! Love-Hate--Love!!! Perfectly portrayed in Chris-Brandon--Aaron!!
As our friend Cod felt, I too, thought that Aaron's character and all he acts resulted from the act of Chris' consciousness, at first. And then it hit me - it is your voice, Michael! You created Aaron to explain Chris' real character to all of us as it existed in your mind - in its purest form without being partial to any one of his real traits!
Aaron completed Chris by having him realize that Brandon completes his entire existance! Not again will Chris ever be attracted to someone without any underware except his B, nor would he ever walk into someone's room anticipating a hot sex session except to his B's.
Aaron, you're hot, sexy, sensitive, and in-general deep! Everything one would want from a lover! And Michael, you care for your baby with motherly love, the way an author ought to love his/her favorite character in a masterpiece creation such as this series! Chris felt this wonderful warmth in just one touch, didn't he?
A character that mimicks the consciousness has been a commendable and successful style in the past, but when a new character surfaces just towards the (promised) end, it makes me wonder if bringing out all you intended to portray in Chris has been acomplished or much more sensessional detail about him is yet to come in the concluding chapter(s). You've made Chris thought to himself before going into Aaron's room that he won't see him again, and yet at departing, he tells him "See you later." You've left it wide open for Aaron to be yourself pointing out what you really want us to see in this entire series' other characters, and for him to be just Chris' consciousness as "See you later" fits in perfectly for such a pair!
You really are one hell of a writer, Michael. Detention has proven this - where age-old characters and emotions are brought together in today's environment, the new age - our age, and they all still fit amazingly so well! And many more of your stories will continue to do so, I am sure. You've been gifted with the art of writing - don't ever give it up. Not everyone is able to create a story that is so touchy, moving and heartmelting, episode after episode!
One more thing - Your skill to divert your reader's interst, attention and sympathy from one character to another - that was in the beginning at the other end of the spectrum is seldom seen - I am waiting to see what happens to Chris now more than I did the same for Brandon at the beginning of the series. I wouldn't say I hated Chris' character by the analogy of "the other end of the spectrum", but I surely disliked the way he acted. You managed to spring out a symathetic, caring, and finally loving side in many of us for your "C".
Yes, Chris rocks as much (if not more) as I once thought Brandon did! ... AND YOU ROCK, AMONG THEM ALL!!!! :)
And that, is a real achievement as a writer! A feeling of even more worthiness, I am sure! :)
Posted by anon
Whoa.. long wait for this last chapter yo. great story, loved it from beg to end
Posted by .....................
LAST?!?! OMG no way!!! boo hoo
Ps. Mr Booker, Great Story BEst Author EVER!
Posted by Lisa
I can't wait for chris and brandon to get back together, I hope nothing ruins that. Damn this story was hot, can't wait for the next one, you always keep us guessing
Posted by BookerFan
I kinda don't want the next one to come out.... :(... cuz that means no more detention after that.. *sob* nooooooooooo
Posted by sexxy
I love the way you write. The way you put things. keep on writing.
Posted by Michael Booker
15 is the last, just to let everyone know
Posted by BookerFan
Thanks for extending Detention in the first place.. Really appreciate it! Detention will always be the best series on this site.
Posted by Cod
Dear Michael it was obvious by the turn of the events that you were intenting to conclude the story and I’m afraid there’s nothing that will make you reconsinder. As a matter of fact you were planning to finish it in the 10th episode,but eventually you relented in our strong,coercive,solicitant and protrusive pleas and demants!The result vindicate us,but most important you as an author;It’s transparent that the last 4 episodes were the fairest of them all:many thanks for this my friend!I strongly believe that this magnificent story deserves such an end,scrumptious,effulgent and sterling,thereupon take as much time it’s necessary to accomplish this!You never failed us so far,you won’t do this now!As I’ve already told you it depress me keenly that this ravishing story will finish,but in all fair stories or fairy tales-choose what’s more appropriate- there comes an end,a happy end by the way!The thing that made this story so special,shrewd and thriving is the fact that it’s actually a love story!In our unrommantic and materialistic days that sex seems the ulterior objection,this story avouched au fond that we all reminisce,crave,long and seek romance in our lives and hearts!This is confirmed by the fact that this story is the major smash ever,with so many votaries that kept it on the top almost from the beginning,in a site full of stories that focalize only,primarily and mainly,in sex!Ergo I rest my case!It still aggrives deeply though that Detention reached its ineluctable end.
The promising and optimistic thing is that another great story is in process:Secrets! Very few realised it,just because we’re attached and fastened in Detention,therefore not giving Secrets the credit it deserves.I esteem that in Secrets you extended and illustrated your talent;there’re many virtues literarily speaking in this story that were missing in Detention,thereupon get your engines started!Altough I’m impatient and anxious about the end of Detention and the installment of Secrets,I’m willing to wait,as all of your readers,for as long it’s necessary for you,especially under these circumstances!So mate take as much time you need and keep up the exceptional work and hope to hear from you soon!
Posted by paolo marco
wow michael... this story was completely amazing... i just love it...
Posted by Ian
I am a big fan and will continue to be even after both Detention and Secrets conclude. I am hooked! Thanks, Michael! And take your time with 15...I'm in no hurry for it to be over!
Posted by SisQo
any future story plans for Luke? i liked his character...
Posted by Ian K.
I like Jason & Billy together. How exactly did the two of them hook-up? My guess was that Billy felt slighted by Chris wanting to spend all his time with BRandon, so he turned to the one person who could understand his pain - Jason, the guy Brandon slighted. Close enough?
Posted by matt
i just want to tell you that this is the best series i have ever read. you write so well. you write with such detail and emotion that it makes your stories so good and so believable. im glad that you extended it so much and im happy with everything except one thing: i think that it would have been better and hotter if chris had had sex with aaron. i really wanted that to happen. brandon should have had sex with luke. but anyways i cant wait for 15. im upset though that youre ending it there.
Posted by jac
I cant wait for the detention-15. I really like this series. I'll give this 6 stars
Posted by Andrew
GOOD PLEASE FINISH I NEED TO KNOW!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by Doug
Definitely am enjoying the series. This episode though strikes me as unrealistic. One aspect of gay sexual behavior I've seen again and again is that guys are sluts (I know I am). I think Chris should have fucked Aaron because a man with a hardon with another butt naked man is going to fuck him - and maybe feel guilty later. B should have gotten fucked by B, and thought about what it meant (not a lot).
There is a gay couple I know where I've been fucked by the top, and fucked the bottom on separate ocassions. They don't talk about it, but they both do it. It is exciting to be wanted.
So based on my experience, I thought they should have gone through with it.
Posted by danny
are you going to keep writing. cuz in the beginning you said you were done but this is like a cliff hanged but i love this story so much. you put so much passion into it =]
Posted by guest
The end?! Man if that was the end I'm seriously dissapointed. No number 15? And I think the part with chris and Jason all in brandons house shouldn't have ended up with chris there for sex you should have made it so Jason and brandon got together and chris and billy
Posted by j
good story. where is the rest, after #14?
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