Posted by Brianna Can't wait to go to the second part. I am on edge. Very good so far.
Posted by Cod So emotional,yet so sad;Simply perfect!Thanks Mike!
Posted by Cod So emotional,yet so sad;Simply perfect!Thanks Mike!
Posted by Cod So emotional,yet so sad;Simply perfect!Thanks Mike!
Posted by Cod So emotional,yet so sad;Simply perfect!Thanks Mike!
Posted by Cod So emotional,yet so sad;Simply perfect!Thanks Mike!
Posted by maleangel Fantastic!
Posted by Marcus Whoa, that sure was a pretty exciting chapter. I sure do like that Eve character. As soon as she appeared, the story changed into some type of action packed "on a mission" movie. And that's what I like about her. She'll stop at nothing to get something done. I hope she's in the second part.
Posted by me i fucking hate that eve. sorry.
btw, this is the fourth time i read this story. i'm such a freak!
Posted by Albert This culd easily pass as d best story i hav read on dis site cos it is one i can certainly relate to.... Keep writin broda...
Posted by Albert This culd easily pass as d best story i hav read on dis site cos it is one i can certainly relate to.... Keep writin broda...
Posted by Albert This culd easily pass as d best story i hav read on dis site cos it is one i can certainly relate to.... Keep writin broda...