Posted by Mike A wonderful story ... this could run and run (please god it does!!!)
Posted by paul misiura i love this story i like the consept very close to me and my FRIEND
Posted by Ken Amazing story. Please continue it. I'd like to se more of this.
Posted by Pat Hi Nick, Again, A great story here. Extremely well written. This has to be something you personally exsperienced or that of a close friends. Either way simply fantastic! Pat:)
Posted by Curtis Grey The story is very well written carry on writing great work :]