Posted by Morris I would like to know what happends after if you don't mind.. I hope it is a happy ending
Posted by C holy crap dude...this was an amazing story. Congrats to you!
Posted by Arch It was long but i enjoyed it.. G0od job! :D
Posted by Arch It was long but i enjoyed it.. G0od job! :D
Posted by mike Amazing - wonderful story, would love to hear about Scott's next visit.
Posted by Aaeon THE BEST STORY YET XCELLENT KEEP IT UP!!!
Posted by David Fanastic stuff. Really well written. I loved it.
Posted by Steve Oh please!
Posted by Steve These stories are stolen, he's a fraud.
Posted by Curt Great story looking forward to what happens next
Posted by luke Brilliant please post more!!!
Posted by Steven agree with all comments made except Steve's. i dunno how he figures that almost all the stories on this site are copied. however, if this one is, i don't really care, thanx for bringing it to us, the audience on this site.
Posted by bob donnachie A really good storyline,and pretty close to what can happen when you have mixed feelings about your sexuality,well done you,whens the next one due. matelot
Posted by pacsurferboy Dude that was a mind blowing story. After reading the first paragraph I was addicted!! Excellent story, very realistic(for the most part), true emotional, and just mind blowing. Awesome job dude, full props on the story! So how does the story end? Do they ever see each other again? I hope so... -pacsurferboy
Posted by Drew Doug used him (Scott)for a WHORE then passed him
around to his BUDDIES. Doug is a real prince and when he and his buddies are done using him then
they will get rid of him like trash..
Posted by marcus that was fuckin awsum....the way you took the time to detail the story was amazing,,,,,that story was 10 out of 5 stars..thank you
Posted by david sharon well this is my all time favrout story, i read it many many times. all the times when i read it i have my fanticies about fucking doug brady. the way he liked his asshole getting licked and toung fucked is so hot. he is straight but i claim that ever cute and handsome man has a very hot ass. it is injustice if some handsome guy poses to be staright and refuse to give his asshole for fucking by hungry guys like us. i really want to fuck doug brady some day, i can fuck him all night.
Posted by johan wow wow wow
when can we expect the new chapter
Posted by Amo You real should continue with this story line and the charicters
Posted by Romeo I love this story. I can't wait for the chapter/story. The end made it seems like there's still a strong friendship bond with the beginning of a secret love bond! The best story I read on this site so far.
Posted by kamaki that was a FRICKEN AWESOME story
Posted by Romeo I can't stop reading this story! I love how the emotional bond is detailed with the physical bond. It seems that Scott and Doug friendship just gets stronger.
I like how Doug and Scott is forming a secret love for each other but can't quite say the words"I love you". I like how you show that at the end without showing it. I hope there's another chapter because this sounds like the beginning of a fantastic book. One which I would buy.
Posted by Kenboy.... great!!!...to me it sounds like Doug is secretly in love with Scott....
Posted by MJ This was one of the best stories I read ever! God is so, the love the pasion, dissaoointment and the confusion. I had somewhat the same experience (without the whole marines orgy or friends in the marines) but with a good friend of mine and I feel for Scott. This was every gay guys dream! I love it and want to read more!
Posted by gary warner OH my god, i loved the story, it got me so hard that i had to stop reading for a few.
Posted by shawn excellent story. well written. hope you continue the story. the best story i have read on here
Posted by Jack this is one hell of an awesome stories. i'm eager to know whats happening next.
Posted by jay BEST STORY EVER!! I love the way u detail everything! Cnt wait for the new chapter!! Kepp it up ur amazing!!
Posted by Mark Nice! Want to see more stories like this...
Posted by lee oh my God... I really love it!!! It's soo fuckin amazing... I'd read mor dan 10times esp.. The orgy part!!! Oh God i hop it wil also happen to me!!wishful thingking lol!!! Oh i hop u read my email. Keep up d gud work Pete. I luv it...