Posted by Kamaki Love the all the twists and turns!!! Keep up the good work!!!!
Posted by md i like where you have taken the story...but i think you should push the jealousy even more...let doug develope a relationship with sean and have it so erin doug and sean hav multiple interactions
Posted by brandon Great story. You have to continue this I'm dying to see what happens!
Posted by Josh sanchez sorry it's been a while since i've been on.
i'm working on the next part. i uploaded a new story though. read it!
Posted by brandon Please continue I really like this story!
Posted by steven josh mate! u gutta continue this story aye?! im busting for the new part. haha, i like the ones with the breaking of relationships (which in the end, of course, are repaired.) love this story mate! continue ur fine work!
Posted by anonomous56 ok um dude u cant just cut this short even though it sounds like a soap opera. Or a novela jugining by one of ur stories and ur pen name if its not ur real name. Anyways keep writing gotta find out wut happens next
Posted by anonomous56 Ps dude for real how old r u and which state or country do u live in? I dont believe ur a teen writer!
Posted by josh i'm sixteen, almost seventeen. i live in washington state man don't believe me then shoot me an email. but i added the new addition finally sorry everyone i've been caught up with alot of shit lately lol
Posted by josh and yeah i have watched lots of novellas. and i kind of took the story for a new turn, but it'll end up with stuff you might not expect. i don't know how long i'll continue this story yet, but i'm gonna have fun with it!