Posted by Mike Nice story, thank you. Sad ending though. Would love to hear more about your relationship.
Posted by PWL Nice story....keep writing.
Was this a true story?
Posted by Sebastien Very well written. Offers a bit more emotion than other stories out there. Too bad the anal intercourse wasn't written as long as the oral job, but nothing to really criticize. Great job.
Posted by Ken That is an awesome story. A very well written erotic one at that. It had a sad ending but at least there was 12 years of good loving.
Posted by Romeo Sorry man, this is the most boring story I ever read. I fell asleep on it several times.
Half of the story was about Shawn pleasuring Gary. When it came down to Gary pleasuring Shawn, the story got worse.
George came to my surgery about a problem with his knee and quickly realised that I was the guy he'd had sex with in the changing room of a clothes shop...