Posted by joe to fast moving its like reading a sex story sparknotes. good premise though, try adding more detail and body to these.
Posted by Alejandro I loved it plz put more
Your an exelent writer good luck.
Posted by Alejandro I loved the story do more plz there very good and exiting. Do some stories on thee guys like Jesse McCartney, David Archuleta, nathan kress, and others
Posted by mohammad from kuwait thanks its awsome keep up with the good work
Posted by Nick 4-22-09.Hi.Thank You.Nice story.
Posted by Erin I agree it's a lot like sparknotes. to fast. not enough detail. it was good just take your time and explain better but I liked it(:
Posted by Mike did i like it?? the answer is a great big - NO.
this was total shit - sounds like it was written by a pre-pubescent ten year old.
if i could rate it zero then i would but i can't so it gets a one from me.
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Posted by Chilony My wife's brother usuall comes to visit us on the weekends. He is a college student. At the other weekends, I went out for a field work. When I returned home, my daughters who is around 16 seems to be sick. I asked what wrong with her. Since there is anyone at home, she told me unbelievable story. She told me that her uncle tried to rape her last night, when she cried for help my wife who is a step mother to her came and caught her mouth. She was fucked so hard by her step uncle. She told me that she felt sick around her ass because she was fucked her ass so storng with the help of the step mother. I don't beleive her first. she told me that after fucking my daughter, my wife was also started to be fucked by her own brother infront of my daughter. I felt that such things must be spied. I know that I am a gay. I do have many friends whom I fuck very well and in turn they do me the same. The next week I told to my wife, I should visit my parents the weekends with my daughter. Then, I took my daughter with me and put her in my mother's house and returned home secretely. When the night fell, I started spying my own house. That young sexy boy was sitting on the soffa and his own sister was kneeling in fron of him and sucking his cock. I wanted to jump into the house and kill both of them, but I left them for a while. In my mind I planned other thing. They stood up and went into my bedroom. Since I have keys I opened carefully the doors and entered home. I took the video camera and follwoed their entire action. Without closing the bedroom's door, my wife was fucked hard by her own brother. After taking the picture of their whole activity, I went out of the house when they became tired and sleep together. By the next day, I came home early in the morning and knocked at my door. My wife opened the door to me. I haged her and got int home. Before I usually kissed her on her lips. I told her that I forget my ID which I put last night in the drawer. She looked worn out. After having supper around five, I told to my wife's brother to hve bear together. He became happy and followed me. After having three bottles of bear, I took my wife's brother to the secrete place where my gay friends and I got fucked another. All of them greeted me happily. Since I told them the plan, they all get ready for the scene. I told him to remove his clothes. He hesitated. Immediately, Dickonson who is the fatest of all stood form his seat and started hime warmuping. Then, that youg guy removed his all clothes off. It was observed that he felt afraid of something. Three, of my gay freinds hel Dickenson in wormuping the boy and oiling him with lubricants. Dickenson said he is vergin, after inserting his finger. I told to my wife's brother the entire story and crime he committeded on me. Then after he prepared hismself for the revange. Four of them fucked him till he became lose. Finally, after making him clean I took him home. When he reached home he felt his sister came towards him to help. I pulled her to the sofa and told her the entire story. Thenafter, I told her to leave my home. I gave them my car to be far away from me then after.
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Posted by Literary Genius Why the fuck does this fucking worthless bullshit stain even get posted on the internet? Whoever wrote this will burn then rot in many depths of hell.