Posted by michael oh my god that is the best story ever, when i usualy read these i just read the maybe 1 or 2 pages but when i read this i got into it and read it all, if i could i would print it out and make a book lol, honestly this is the most best story i have ever read, it kept me reading and reading, first i thought dave was going to die so i kept reading that i got anxious to see what would happend, honestly i dont no you, but wow you can right, im 18 and yea im an okay writer but wow, please email me sometime
Posted by Llake I LOVE IT IT WAS PERFECT U SHOULD WRITE MORE LIKE THIS OMG U HVAE JUST BECAME MY FAV WRITER....u expressed every thing i went through when i was in highschool but with a little more degree....bless u
Posted by Bill Wow! What a fantastic story line. Not crass, a lot of excitement, a lot of intrigue, a lot of suspense. I loved reading the entire story together. Although I had to come back a second day to finish it, I knew it was there. Kudos for waiting to post until it was finished. You're an excellent writer.... Hope to see mmore
Bill
Posted by Adam Estel OH MY FREAKIN GOSH. I have never read a more incredible story. I would give anything if it were me, absolutly superb. Please tell me this is true??? Its a magnificent masterpiece.
Bravo, really, bravo!
Posted by Mike Well, I agree with all the previous comments - that is one fantastic story. Thank you very much for writing it down. You are an excellent writer and you certainly kept the story flowing. Probably the best I've ever read. Thank you again.
Posted by Terkish WOW....the most romantic story i ever read. the best so far. keep it up, mike!!!!!
Posted by kris i love this whole story it was so romantic and beautiful. i just loved it. cant wait to read the next one.
Posted by anthon this was an amazing story , best ever just adored it can't wait to read another story u wrote
Posted by Ken Excellent story and very well written. Hope You have some more stories to tell. Thanks
Posted by Mike There is only one word to describe this story and that is AMAZING. It is the most beautiful, stunning love story I have ever read. So much so, that I have read much of it with tears rolling down my face.
I just hope that the story can be carried on and that we can find out what happens in England over the summer and then over the next few years to Michael and David!!
Posted by Andy I just had to write and tell you how much I loved your story. Yes I am one of the people who has saved it to read over again. i am a little older than most of your readers and remember the times not long ago when one was an outcast for being in love with the so called wrong person. You told it with class and style and it brought back so many memories.
Just Thanks for a great story.
Posted by Jason This is one of the best stories I have read on here I think. I hope you plan to continue writing more.
Posted by Larry This story is more than amazing...its marvelous. I've read it twice already. I'm 19 and live in a coutry where gay love is still considered "anti-nature" and this is so much similar to what many of us go through back in Africa. Hope you continue with sequels. Definitely I wont be tired of seein parts 2,3,4,5.... Bravo!!!
Posted by Russ I can't believe what a heart-warming story this was. It was just like what so many of us have to go through and endure when we are young, and fall in love with a person of the same sex. Though it's classified as fiction, I would have to say that somewhere out there, this actually took place. You're very talented Mr. Sheridan, hope there's more stories like this in your future of writing. My sincere thanks to you for posting it.
Posted by Tony hurley This this the best story that i have ever read ,,and it hits so close to home, thank you with (tears in my eyes), This gives me something to look forward to in the years ahead.
Posted by Tony While reading this story I looked back on my days in school and found myself in your story line. It was amazing how things devoloped not only in my life but in you story, We you there with me. I thank you from the bottom of my heart and so does me lover shane, Please keep the story comming and i promise that we both will read and reply to it,, Again Thanks
Posted by Rafael Rojas That was an amazing story filled with love, pain, and happines. Please write another one!! I will loyally read them!!!
Posted by Brandon Wow! If I could think of the words. Although It's a little romancy for a porn site. It touched me.
Posted by Mike OMG!!! i love this story more than anything!!! it is so inspiring!! it completely took my breath away.
Posted by D.Gussin Well what an emotional story, brought a tear to my eye towards the end, just wish gay life was that simple I wish, no it was well written and a joy to read, the best so far.
Posted by Mark First off, I would like to say that I have never read more heartfelt literature in my life, and I am an English professor! This story has so much raw emotion. The intense passion, the undying love. And the plot was so real. I have to know, was it a true story? Something had to be true though-no one could write like that without having felt those feelings. I have only one criticism Mr. Sheridan. Why was this story on this website? It belongs in a book. Thank you.
Posted by Charles Edwards I have come to this site & read alot of the stories & have never gotten so into any of them as I have with this one. The first thing I do is see how long the story is & decide if I want to read it from the first two paragraphs. I can tell you that once I started I couldn't stop. You have a very good understanding of human emotions & how to tell a great story. I truly enjoyed your take on a bad situation that so many people had to endure & love the way you worked it out. I agree that I hope you continue to adding more stories to the site & would love to read any thing else that you have out there. Terrific job!!!
Posted by nick blake WOW this is the best story i have ever read when i started reading it i couldn't stop it brought a tear to my eye lol keep up the great work
Posted by sd The best I've ever read. I had tears in my eyes from page 1. Do you have any others like this? Or a part 2?
Posted by christ it is very very nice story...
i cried when i finished reading this..
it a bit same with my life now..
i'm just 19yo....haha..
great job...
i love it so much....^^
Posted by Kobe(biggest fan) nice well done write some more!! like a sequel or something!!!!
Posted by Kobe just had to read it again if there is a part 2 please email me or if you have other writings
Posted by Indra What a great story, its not only a creepy sex story but also a dramatic live history between 2 gay guy who could survive and have courage to tell everybody bout their love. It would be great on film too.
Posted by Tyler OH MY GOD! I loved your story tis both erotic and the most romantic thing ive ever read in my entire life! It was beautiful you did a great job writing it. I hope you get to right a gay romance novel just like this i would definetily read it over and over again. Thank you for this wonderful story
Posted by kamaki Fricken AWESOME LOVE STORY, a bit long but exquisite writing!!!!
Posted by jeffc0884 ugghhh...I FREAKIN LOVE IT! i couldnt stop reading. it had so many emotions and made me feel them to. i freaking love it. and your writing and usuage of words and everything was amazing. ~jeff~
Posted by James BEST story I've read ever...I cried and cried...I was happy then sad GREAT! I cried at the end of it because it was over!!! You totally need to write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by Boy Feet Lover ;) What a beautiful story! This is seriously, the best story ive read on this site. I can totally picture this being made into a movie, it was that wonderful. Keep up the good work Mike!! ;)
Posted by Jack Oh my goodness! i was burst into tears when the story has come to an end. It should be made in movie. i definitely gonna watch it thousand times. My fave ever! :')
Posted by shea hey I love it to bits. I was crying like a kid when reading it....... Its like a true love story. It would make a good movie. Thank you With love Shea.
Posted by Ralph A very nice love story with romance not just sex.
Posted by tim this was one of the best stories i have ever read.... i give it 5 stars... amazing
Posted by will What an amazing story. This is the best story I have reed in a long time. I would love to read more.
Posted by Hopeless Romantic Best story I've ever read. I stayed up late just to finish reading it. I actually haven't got a boner 'cause I was carried away by the LOVE story not with the SEX. I hope this will happen in reality... to me! Haha.
Posted by Taylor By far the best story on this website, not like most of the others that focus mainly around the sex between the characters. You should try and publish pieces like this :)
Posted by AL OMG...decidin 2 read all 8 pages was d best decision i hav made all year. Perfect dialogue, stunnin intrigue, 1daful tensin nd so much more made dis my all tyme fav... Pple culd learn a ton 4rm ur writin, so i advice u cosider novel publicatn if u already havnt. Kip it up cos dis is 1 hell of a story; cos it made me cry....lol.
Posted by drgay04 best story ever!!!!!!!
ive laughed, cried, got scared, been in love, made love, felt courageous, and proud to be gay just by reding this story.
its an inspiring one.
thank you, author! :)
Posted by kenrick I love this story it touch my heart ...
I have always had feeling for a sortten someone and now I know what to do
Thks
Hope you can write some more just like this
Posted by anonymous such a great story! have never read any like this. keep up the good work bro!