Posted by mike That was a lovely first part to a story. thank you. looking forward to your next part already. Well written.
Posted by Jim A very good story. Do keep up with it. i would love to read more.
Posted by niv that was a good intro to a possibly very interesting series
Posted by Bradley LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEE THIS STORY CANT WAIT FOR NEXT PART.
Posted by Brandon Great job Brad! Very realistic story...kinda similar to mine. Very Good!
Posted by Petre Great, wonderful, awesome, and well-written story. I love the characters and the story line. I can't wait for Part 2 and you're an amazing author too. Sincerely, A, happy to find such a
great new story, reader
Posted by Sebastien Good job! Great interesting title! Looking forward to next installment! Hope the sex is good!
Posted by Nick this is an awsome story! i love when its more than just sex and theres actual emotions behind the plot. plus the way everything is written makes it really believable.
Posted by James Fitzhugh Coming out stories are always the hardest to get right the first time. I think in this Chapter you have done an even and well balanced job. You ahve covered the turmoil an individual would go through very nicely. I, for example, did not have any friends to come out to; and, I know many others whom I have met over the years who have never come out to their family or friends because of the fear of rejection. Great job. Keep writing
Posted by shawn williams Great story. Very well written, I enjoyed it very much. I hope you keep witting, I would love to see where this goes