Posted by bren I love it.
Posted by Benjamin You should immediately make more following this one. It was great, keep it up!
Posted by Anomonus that was the most amazing thing I ever read . I want to read more plez finsh the story
Posted by landon Amazing... def. keep writing!
Posted by Tylor Hey man that is a GREAT story! I am definately looking forward to reading more!
Posted by josh sanchez thanks guys! (:
I'm workin on the next part
have it up soon
Posted by Junior GREAT STORY...... WAITING ON PART 2
Posted by Samual Dude that was great cant wait for part 2
Posted by kira wow that is one hot
Story!!
Posted by eric awesome story. bring in tom and do a threesome.
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Posted by anonomous56 Not bad not bad but whos this other kid from the coffee shop? I smell another novela cooking!
Posted by anonomous56 Ps No seriously after reading all ur stories u cant b a teen! This stuff is phenomenal i mean the twist the turns the drama! But for the love of jesus please finish writing for ur other stories too! Now im way too interested too wait any longer! Keep writing and faster too!
Posted by josh haha well i am a teen like i've said and i'm going to continue my stories now that i'm back to the site again
Posted by Ethan E, great story mann..!! I loved it to the very last words. So exciting and so fuckin intense.!!!
Cant wait to read the next part!!
Posted by Gary Amazing story. Very well written. First time I jacked to a story. very HOT. Please continue and bring Tom into the fold.
Look forward to reading the next part.
Again, very well written.
Posted by albsexy That was hot wish I could get it like that MMMMM
Zander was dreaming. It was like a dream within a dream, Zander was dreaming that he was soaring through the air. Then all of a sudden, he starts to fall. The fall seems to be endless as Alan falls helplessly out of the sky.
Suddenly his fall ends.
Zander awoke's from his nightmare in a cold sweat. His pulse raced with fear.
After quick shower he get's dressed. He headed for the kitchen...