Posted by Mike Lacked something that the other chapters had - perhaps it was the fact that it seemed a little disjointed and things that happened were out of character for the characters.
Hope the next chapter reverts back to the usual incredibly high standard of writing.
Posted by Mikey What's going on, I'm having Mitch/Colby grow. Colby got tired of being walked on all his life. And Mitch finds himself not quite as in control being at a slight disadvantage. In order for the saga to continue, I felt they needed to grow as men. I can't keep having them all sweet and lovey-dovey. I need drama and tension. Cole is that key w/Mitch. And Marie is a thorn in Colby's ass. Colby needs to toughen his exterior and be more of an adult now. I have a few ideas in mind for part 12. ;) I'd really appreciate seeing how others take this installment.
Posted by Scott AWESOME SERIES...I would so like to know where you got the ideas for all of this, lemme know if you want!
Posted by Kat I might have said this before but I must correct myself, this HAS TO BE THE BEST so far in the series. I just loved it, the tension, the conflict the unfolding drama. Man your writing is awesome. Could say what I wish to see happening but I think that would spoil the surprise and I completely agree, sweet and lovey-dovey is a bit boring. Can't wait for 12, my imagination is already running away with me!!!!!