Posted by Scott Yet again Mike, AWESOME JOB...:-P...you have a talent! You should consider finishing it and getting it published...thats just my thought! I would personally like to see Colby's Step-Mom die, but w/e turns your crank. I take it you're from the US? Canada here, and unfortunatley we don't allow gay marriages...YET...LOL...I dunno...just thought I would mention that cause you were talking about it when Colby & Mitch were gonna go for the handfasting ceremony! Anyways, I gotta run...talk to ya soon!
Posted by Kat Another good story, appeared to me that at times the characters got mixed up as to who was were and when, nevertheless thoroughly enjoyable with a great finish. looking forward to 13.
Posted by Mike Back to its sensational best!!! After a slightly disappointing Part 11 the story seems to have recovered its usual momentum - brilliant. Part 13 as soon as possible - please!!
I wanted to be on my best behavior. I wanted that job so I could make a little extra money, and have an excuse to be even closer to coach and his new assistant...