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Posted by Kat
I would be telling a lie if I said I wasn.t a bit dissappointed. I felt a little cheated by not getting to really share the momentary grief with Colby as well as Drake's anxiety as they waited by the woods as well at their relief. I did however appreciate the way you left handing Nick's real feelings and the way you portrayed his response, a mixture of coldness, uncertainty but with love and warmth still at play. Nevertheless I enjoyed the story, you retained your best writing position and I can't wait to read 14 and find out what, if anything happens to Colby. I have to confess however that I hope the meeting up with Marie is not far off and it is explosive as I'm expecting it to be with the b**** getting what she deserves, a first class ticket on a painful ride to hell. Take care mate and post 14 soon.
Posted by Mike
Not really up to the standard of many of the other chapters of this brilliant story!!
More exploration of what happened in the woods would have been good - it all seems to have been un-necessarily rushed.
Hope the next chapter returns to the previously high standard.
Posted by Mike
Not really up to the standard of many of the other chapters of this brilliant story!!
More exploration of what happened in the woods would have been good - it all seems to have been un-necessarily rushed.
Hope the next chapter returns to the previously high standard.
Posted by Mikey
Guys, thanx for the input. Just a lil side note from me. This story has grown so much. And its not always easy to give you guys all you thirst for in every chapter. I'm trying to get back to its roots with some sexual excitement. But where the current story is, its impossible. There's so much going on right now and I'm trying to make sure each character is staying true to who they really are and each one is advanced enough. I didn't focus so heavily on the incident in the woods because I was leary taking the story into a dark area. I didn't want it to be a murder mystery and I was debating how dark I wanted it. I'm trying to give each character some depth it part 14 and add a few twists. It might be delayed, but it will come and I am working on it! :)
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