Posted by Mikey I'm getting reviews for 16, but none for 15...LOL But it seems both are being enjoyed.
Posted by Scott THIS IS AWESOME...I really think you should consider getting published...I would by a copy :-D...great job...AGAIN...I can't say that I have EVER been disappointed by your work...DONT STOP WRITING...you have a gift...I hope you intend to use it :-D!
Posted by Mike Absolutely amazing - I cried like a baby whilst reading this chapter!! it was just so emotionally charged!!
The problems of previous chapters which flittered here and there seem to have been truly resolved in this chapter. There are a few different strands of the story running (and a new one introduced!) but this time it seems to have been done cleatly and decisively. Well done Mikey - an absolute piece of genius!!
I can't wait to read the next chaper and hope that the theme of the long lost brother is well followed.
This story would make an amazing film by the way!!!
Posted by Rick good story, waiting for next part. goog goin
Posted by Destiny this is such a WONDERFUL story i agree that you should publish this as an novel i also write books myself and i would love to do callaboration with you :)
He’d managed to swallow me and I could feel his nose nuzzling my scrotum and realized if he didn’t quit that humming he was doing, I’d explode. Since there didn’t seem to be any way to tell him to slow down while my mouth was full, I just did the same to him...
Kyle pulled away from Max’s lips and turned to head towards the bedroom but Max grabbed his hand and didn’t move. “I want to fuck you right here on the floor,” he murmured hotly in Kyle’s ear. “Get on your knees baby,” he demanded, looking right into Kyle’s dark brown eyes...