Posted by Mikey Geez, was this chapter THAT bad? All this time and not ONE review?
Posted by Kat Don't get discouraged dude, the chapter wasn't bad at all. It was excatly what we (I'm sure I speak for all you fans) have come to expect from you, guess we're all used to the good stuff we figure you know it already, though if I might say so myself, the misfortune that seems to follow Mitch and Colby can get a wee bit too much. I hope there isn't much of that in the last two chapters. I notice that you've gone quiet on Colby and Cory's father, what's happening with him? The decision to end on Chapter 25 was a good one, in my opinion, you're right the series has run it's course. I have to admit I'm now drawn more to Cory and keep fast reading to see how much of him you've included. I'm glad he's found someone and I guess you'll end it with him getting the hotel and them all starting a new life there. Suggestion, let it end with a separtion of the four, let Mitch and Colby not move with Cory. By the way, did they ever quit being firemen? I seem to have missed that part. Well, after such a long silence, that's my piece. Take care bud and don't keep us waiting too long for 24. Reviews or not, we still want to see how it all ends.
Posted by DAVE HOW LONG MORE TO THE NEXT INSTALLMENT??? ARGGHHH CANT WAIT...PLEASE HURRY!
Posted by SHANE tick tock tick tock,i'm freaking out I NEED THOSE FINAL CHAPTERS....it's seriously a great story...it made me feel deep emotions..that's really hard for something to do to me... good work...(KEEP IT UP)
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Posted by derekgussin1@mac.com WoW, since finding this site, I have read some stories on here, but these ones have been the best so far i just hope the author posts the last few chapters soon well worth the read starts hot and chapter 23 finishes Hot.
Posted by Ed Hey Mike
I liked this story very much but there are missing thw two last chapters. Where can I find them?
Posted by Ed Hey Mike
I liked this story very much but there are missing thw two last chapters. Where can I find them?
Posted by senior1952 Man: as all of us readers, I started reding your story expecting action to take place but even in the chapters where no sex occured, I couldn't stop reading. Please give us tje final chapters as soon as you can. You can't leave us like that.
Posted by johan please please please where is the next xhapter
Posted by Shaun Come on we need the final chapter we have to know wat happens with colby and mitch
Posted by Brandon THIS STORY IS THE GREATEST I HAVE EVER READ IN SUCH A LONG TIME I REALLY THINK IT SHOULD BE MADE INTO A MOVIE. IM JUST SAD THAT CHAPTER 24 AND 25 ARE NOT POSTED UNLESS YOU ARE STILL WORKING ON IT?? KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK
Posted by JOSE MENDEZ I HAVE READ THIS STORY WITH THE UTMOST INTEREST BUT I AM DISAPPOINTED AS I AM NOT ABLE TO FIND FINAL CHAPTERS 24 AND 25.
PLEASE ADVISE HOW WILL I BE ABLE TO FIND FINAL CHAPTERS.
THANKS / BEST REGARDS
Posted by MICKY OMG I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY..I CRIED A FEW TIMES :( COLBY AND MITCH ARE SO GORJUS 2GETHA..THIS IS SUCH MOVIE MATERIAL! CAN U PLZ PLZ PLZ HURRY WITH PARTS 24 AND 25 WE ARE DYING TO C WAT HAPPENS TO THESE BOYS!
Posted by Romeo I love this series but I'm getting a little tired of hearing about Mitch and Colby. I want to hear more about Corryn. Does Corry settle down with Wyatt or Bret comes back? Does his past with Bret comes back? I think Corry deserves some happiness also.
I think you should continue more than chapter 25. We need to know more about the others characters like Corry, Wyat, Nick, Drake, and Cole. What happens with them? It good see how Mitch and Colby is getting the happiness but since you gave us the others characters and a little backround , youshouldn't drop them and mainly focus on Colby and Mitch.
Give us more happiness for Corry and the others.
Keep going, give us more than 25 chapters. This could become a great book. It already is.
Posted by Gary I just read another one of your stories and at the end you said that "I just lost interest in the Firehouse stories". What a let down..I wasted my time reading all those fuckin stories, waiting for the final chapter and "you lose interest". Thank you for wasting my time.
Posted by Dallas Maverick's Fan WHAT?
Is that really true Gary.
Where did he said he has lost intrest in the stories?
OMG I cant believe this!
I am a big fan of series Dallas, please dont leave us hanging like that!
O God, this cant be true.
Please Dallas give us chapter 24 and 25.
I insist to remain your faithfull fan.
Posted by Dallas Maverick's Second Fan Mr. Maverick please i love your stories.
They seem so real and lifelike.
If only you would complete them you would be the best author in the world!
Just remember we love you and would like you to give us more reasons to be proud of you. We competely understand you to be busy. Therefore I pray that whatever is keeping you busy get solved!
You are an awesome writer and do you know of the the treasures within you.
Posted by cdfo please finish the last two chapters. I love the series. I'm posting this review on 8/2/2010. It's been almost 5 fucking years. Hurry the fuck up. I don't like bullshit and if you don't finish the last two chapters then the whole thing is a bunch of bullshit!
Posted by Luciano I will hunt you down if you don't finish the story!! It's 2011 now and reading the previous comments looks like I'm not the only one who is eager to find out about the couple. Please don't leave the story as a cliffhanger. Very emotionally powerful and descriptive- please keep it up!!!
Posted by Nick Helo Dallas..
I jst usuali read da stories nd dnt gve ani reviews whethr thy are cmplitd or da authr flt dat he/she hs lst intrst in it. Howvr ds story of urs is amazin nd to kip ur fans hangin on lik ds is reali upsetin...
Ope u r fin in ur lif nd ur helt's gud, coz its startin to freak me ot 4 da tim u ar takin to submit the two lst stories. Coz u ve writn one f da bst stories in ds site and am hopin nd pryin dat u'l submit it as sun as u ar free..
Stay safe..
Posted by rhaf need more....... all I can say is a big big "WOW!!" nice story,,,,, keep it going. it's so enjoyable and exciting. hehehe
Posted by Ruben C'mon dallas, it's been almost 6 years now, I'm still waiting, how long is it going to take to write a new chapter, I'm really sick of the waiting now!
Posted by Jackson Graham Please please please finish the story. I've been looking forward to the hand fasting ceremony. And I'm extremely curious to the outcome (and maybe specific detailed sex scene) of cory and wyatt... please reconsider not writing the end... I would love to read the last chapters... maybe double handfasting with the twins, Mitch and wyatt???
Thank you
Posted by TEDDY its 2012 were is da nxt chapter!!!??