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Posted by Mike
Sensational!!!! Horny yet sensual - can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE - whatever you do when writing the story - don't let Drake split these two up (unfortunately I can see that coming) - Colby and mitch are meant to be together - no doubt!!
One slight crticism - some of the dialogue is too gooey and sugar sweet - therefore not always believable!!
Posted by Michael Booker
As usual, the story is well-written, yet I agree with Mike that it is unlikely two 'masculine' men will go on and on about their love to each other in such a story-book fashion. Good details and descriptions. The main criticism I have with this story, however, is that it really has nothing to do with these two guys being firefighters. We never get to see what it's like for them to go through constant danger or the such. There's really not that much conflict between the two characters. For eight chapters they seem to just get along one hundred percent of the time, which isn't always the case in reality. Anyway, that's all I have to say right now.
Posted by Rick
good writing, obviously educated and knows how to use the right words. the Wicca part was kool and informative and adds to the story, then the awsome hot sex picked things up alot, can't wait to see what happens next. enjoyed it very much
Posted by Nate
Hey, this is a great storyline. I'm one of those "Hopeless romantics", and this is just the ticket for me, hehe.
Glad to find someone who isn't so busy thinking of just fucking people's brains out and is capable of writing an excellent story, albeit with a few missing words in some spots =P.
Posted by Kat
Another goody, however like Mike says, too out of this world. I don't know though, if that's bad, after all it's not supposed to be 100% relateable to real life. Conflict is also good and judging by the ending, you're going to bring that in with Drake's visit and possible the telling of family and friends. You've set it(the conflict)up so nicely and it would add just that much extra to the story and give it a new dimension. There was in parts, a sense of being rushed, but I enjoyed, especially, the opening up to one another of Mitch and Colby it's so totally not in keeping with the stereotypical thinking that males don't share their emotions so deeply, it's new compared to most stories I've read. It also reminded of something in my past, you know...(maybe if ...), so some parts can be related to real life situations. Good luck with 9!
Posted by Mikey
Guys, thanks for the input. Here's a lil 411: Part 9 on (for a while) is going to focus away from sex. Parts 5 and 6 were supposed to be as one. I got a cold that never came on and ended up having a cough from hell. I strained some muscles in my back and abs. I was in pain, BAD! I'd have rather given birth out my ass then go throught THAT! I couldn't eat, breathe or sleep. (Within reason). I didn't want to disappoint so I spilt 5 and 6 up cuz I wasn't able to devote my time to writing as sitting was VERY painful. Parts 7 and 8 were what I was building up to-the ultimate hot sex. Part 9 is going to lay the foundation for many changes. Trust me, Drake will NOT break up Mitch and Colby. Its FAR too cliche. If my fans and admirers of my work have learned anything, I'm not one to go for what's been done. And I have plans to explain Colby's "sugary-sweetness".
Posted by Kat
Can't wait!!
Posted by ken
Awsome job so far man... HOT!!
Posted by ken
I disagree with you guys saying that masculine men would express love they way they are.... my lover and I have been together for 5 years, both very masculine guys. And we let each other know how we feel all the time in loveing ways.
Posted by Wolfe
Excellent!! Love the mixed emotions and stunned aspects. Very realistic. About time there was someone that put a little show of some of the stresses a relationship endures! Can't wait for the next segment.!
Posted by Mike
There are ways to express your love and feelings for one another even as a masculine straight acting guys - I stand by what I originally said - some of the dialogue of this chapter was too gooey and sugar-sweet and seemed out of character.
It will be interesting to see what happens next cos these two guys fascinate me!!
This story could and should run for ever (bit like a weekly soap opera!!) - take that as a positive comment from a UK guy who loves his soaps!!
Posted by Java
Awww Mikey, I was ok with what should have been 2 feet of ice breaking. I tried to contain myself when Colby wrote the "way too much information" e-mail to a straight guy. But a witch? give me a break, I can't go on now. You juyst turned this great story into a B sit-com.
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