Fire in the Firehouse 8 reviews

As usual, the story is well-written, yet I agree with Mike that it is unlikely two 'masculine' men will go on and on about their love to each other in such a story-book fashion. Good details and descriptions. The main criticism I have with this story, however, is that it really has nothing to do with these two guys being firefighters. We never get to see what it's like for them to go through constant danger or the such. There's really not that much conflict between the two characters. For eight chapters they seem to just get along one hundred percent of the time, which isn't always the case in reality. Anyway, that's all I have to say right now.

good writing, obviously educated and knows how to use the right words. the Wicca part was kool and informative and adds to the story, then the awsome hot sex picked things up alot, can't wait to see what happens next. enjoyed it very much

Can't wait!!

Awsome job so far man... HOT!!

I disagree with you guys saying that masculine men would express love they way they are.... my lover and I have been together for 5 years, both very masculine guys. And we let each other know how we feel all the time in loveing ways.

Excellent!! Love the mixed emotions and stunned aspects. Very realistic. About time there was someone that put a little show of some of the stresses a relationship endures! Can't wait for the next segment.!

Awww Mikey, I was ok with what should have been 2 feet of ice breaking. I tried to contain myself when Colby wrote the "way too much information" e-mail to a straight guy. But a witch? give me a break, I can't go on now. You juyst turned this great story into a B sit-com.