Posted by larry Great story keep it coming. I've many relatives as firemen and I know some are gay - helps to relate
Posted by Kat Another goody, and I especially the lack of sex, don't get me wrong, sex is good but sometimes an entire sometimes it's just nice to get to the characters feelings, thoughts etc. I must say the pond part got me thinking how amazing it is that we always come to an important realization wherever we're about to lose something sepcial to us or have lost it already. It would no doubt be intresting to see how that cements Mitch and Colby's love for one another and also how the true nature of Colby's injury adds to their feelings. Great story, enjoyed it immensley!
Posted by ken Awsome story so far dude.. keep up the good work
Posted by Andy Mike the story just gets better as you go along.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Posted by Jason keep up the good work, this series ROCKS !!!!!!
Posted by Rick good story and not just about sex, well done!