Posted by Rick very hot sex and creative and romantic, liked it alot
Posted by Calvin Kool-Aid fucking is hot. That made my day. Only thing is that the dialogue is a little unrealistic, but good story
Posted by Kat Far out dude! I have to say of the previous 6 this takes pole position. The attention that you paid to the detail in describing the setting was terrific, you get to visualize what's laid out and get in the mood for real, with a heightened sense of anticipation for what's to follow. I do however feel that the actual sex part of the story was a bit neglected, kinda like you didn't want it in the story at this time and sort of forced it in. Having set the scene for a hot and intense encounter between Mitch and Colby, I feel you could have paid a bit more attention to the actual act and dragged it out more. Nevertheless I enjoyed it immensely and can't wait for the next installment. Good stuff mate!