Posted by Jose good, but the unresistance of paul makes it unrealistic. At least a little bit, makes the story perfect. A sequel is needed of the gf's reaction, their parents's reaction and their life together.
Posted by seth well,sorry but its not a true story and if it is its missin' some details,like how you set him up.
Posted by nate this story was to short...and bad too
Posted by stephen I'd love to be part of this ;-)
The narrator flees his native village with a guilty conscience and lands up in...
Sri Lanka. After many years, he returns a sick man to Mani's house. He then meets Mani's son. The narrator wonders whether it is Mani's son or his own? The story ends with a question mark.