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Focused 6 reviews
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Posted by Ken
You have one hell of a story here and very well written. I really didn't see the plot of Jimmy being murdered by Matt coming, What a surprise, but did he really do it? I know the evidence is really stacked against him.
I can't wait to see the next part. Please hurry.
Posted by Mike
Just read all six episodes of this story!!!
WOW - is all I can say!! So horny, so hot.
Would've given the author rating a ten but for one thing - the sex between Ethan and Flick just didn't make sense - it seemed totally incongrous to the whole story, so gave the author an eight ... can't wait to see what happens next tho!!
Posted by Corey
Ah, this can't be the end...
Posted by Brad Smith
Wow...thanks for the positive responses. It is the last chapter...sorry, but the ratings haven't been as good as some of the other stuff I've written.
I'm working on some new and original stuff.
Posted by cph9680
You should do another story about Flick and Ethan, that would be hot! Dunno why, but the fuck scene between 'em in Part 5 was the best part of the story...I guess it's the str8 boy fantasy LOL
Posted by brandon
You are a fucking genious! I lovd every part of your story. It was heartbreaking, as well as sexy. And the suspense! Omg i didn't want it to end. You would make an excellent author.
Posted by Romeo
You must be crazy Brad! I think Focus is the best series you wrote.
It's the only story on this cite where jealousy gets involved and leads to a lost. Plus, your ending didn't say ending. It said "To be continued" to "Focus part 2". I hate to tell you this man, your other series was not as good as this series!
You should continue with part 2 of this series. We like to know what's going to happen with Nick, Ben, Eathan, and Flick. It looks like Nick will go through another trama by Ben. We also like to know what happened with Matt and Siearra. You can't leave it with them waiting trial.
I really think you should continue with part 2 of this series! It's the best series you written!
Posted by edgar
dude seriously best story i have read its nice matt killed jimmy i fidnt liked jimmy either
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