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Football Love : Part 2 reviews

Posted by Koua
Yes! Part 2! Thanks this was an awesome story!
Posted by Alejandro
Gahhhhhh that was amazing!!!!! I love this story!!! Cannot wait for part 3!!!
Posted by Sean
Amazing! Can not WAIT for the next part!!!
Posted by Natalia
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! make part 3 soon. lol im going crazy!!! PLEASE!!? 0.0
Posted by Justin
Thanks u really made my day
Posted by Fall
PLEASE CONTINUE YOUR STORIES YOUR AN AMAZIN AUTHOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by Viresh
Hi m dinesh. Its beutiful. 1 of the best story. Lots of love and best wishes. Waiting 4 next and the climax...
Posted by mike
I just wish Alex would have told John sooner on how he felt about him.
Posted by Grady Fallen
It was so great! Can't wait for part 3.
Posted by Donald
Hurry up and wrote part 3!
Posted by Moody Quijada
David, this is so depressing and the ending was unexpected. You just gave the story more background about John and Alex and that's why it's sad that they ended up not together. If, maybe you could write the experiences that Alex and jake had, maybe the ending wouldn't have been too far. GREAT STORY THOUGH.
Posted by Steve
this is great stuff, David! iAM TOTALLLY impressed
Posted by Steve
you have a great feel for the angst people deal with at this age and life situation.
Posted by ryn
John! I like you ALOT!
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